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Sweet Revenge - II
by Karen Petties

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Comment by vicki Stewart on 12/09/08
    OOO, yes, a wonderful story line, I only wish It had been me as the BRIDESMAID instead of Paul. Vicki xx

Comment by Oh so sharp on 12/11/06
I really liked this story - especially the first half. The way Paul was blackmailed and forced to dress as a bridesmaid with appropriate lingerie and then humiliated by his sisters and their friends really turned me on.

My only (constructive) criticism would be that although Paul had earlier been shown to be unsure about his sexuality having been caught with David by Karen, I'd have prefered the sisters to have forced him into the acts described in the second part. His humiliation could have been so much more complete.

Not quite sure it was necessary to introduce Greg into the story either but you are the author and I think I can see where you're coming from. However, to each his own and we are all different after all - and the action was still vividly described.

Minor criticisms aside, a very well written and descriptive story which I very much enjoyed. You're good - very good but you seem to have stopped writing. Shame - I'd like to read more.


Comment by julie j on 07/29/05
this story is very good the actions of sue seeing him dresses as a bridesmaid was amazing the way she had her revenge a dish best servedcold what a way to go a lesson well learnt the hard way  well written &described



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