Great storytelling! As much as I love the character development and progression of the story, I just can't help but feel a little uneasy and sad about the circumstance surrounding Craig's feminization and ultimate transformation into Cathy. She didn't really hate being a boy but simply felt unloved, lonely, and uncared for and associated those feelings with being a boy; she simply wasn't surrounded by loving and caring people when she was younger. I can't help but wonder if she would've stayed as a boy if she had realize that her new friends and family would've still loved her as a boy.

o8hSht Thank you for sharing this fine article. Very interesting ideas! (as always, btw)

b6rcuh Thanks-a-mundo for the article post.Thanks Again. Want more.

Great story,would have liked to have known what happened after he/she came home,or what happened to the rest of the family.But especially to evil Christy.Well done

Since his birth, I've counted Ben as a mmbeer of my extended  family  at the Dunes Bible Camp; indeed, it has been my habit   even before the accident   to refer to Ben as  my little brother  when trying to explain our relationship to people unfamiliar with the Surprunowski family or DBC.Some of my earliest memories are of playing on the camp property with Ben and his sister Danae   hiding in rhododendron bushes, climbing trees, building  forts , and so on. As we grew older, the activities certainly shifted   we spent less time climbing trees and more time playing video games   but Ben continued to be a regular presence in my life.As we both entered our teenage years, I had the pleasure of participating in our church's youth leadership team with Ben, and the even greater pleasure of seeing my little brother grow into a young man with a heart for God, a passion for people, and a persistent inquisitiveness. Especially over the last few years, I've seen Ben refuse to be content with easy answers and unexamined living; instead, he has increasingly made his life and faith his own by seeking to know *why* he lives and believes as he does.More recently, I especially treasure memories of longboarding the Discovery Trail with Ben. My relocation to Portland (and later, Ben's move to California) made our contact less frequent, so our rides on the trail stand out as moments when two old friends reconnected, shared news of their lives, and reminisced as only old friends can.

This is great! It is very good to see that you guys made it into the news! =) And the movie clip is really good! I so aprteciape you guys, and the movies that you make! They are GREAT, God-honoring, family films, and we really enjoy them!!! And we can't wait for Courageous to come out!!! It looks like it will be just as good as the other three! Thank you so much for your ministry, Sherwood Pictures! May God continue to bless you! *Jeremiah 29:11*

How could any of this be better stated? It coldun't.

I had found this story about two weeks ago and while reading between clients and house work I have found this story to be nothing less than wonderful!
I have to say that there are a few simularities with my own life at this point as I have met a wonderful man who accepts me for who I am as well although in the story Gary doesn't know of Cathy's role apparently the way my boyfriend knows of me.

I really enjoy reading happy stories like this one and wish that all TS's could also have a happy life like Cathy's!

Mine is happy as well short of having enough money for my surgery but other than that all is well.

Keep up the good work Jaqui. You are a wonderful story teller for sure! :}

i have finally finished with this story and was very glad i took so long in reading it it was a great story and worked out well in the end well done it was a brilliant story well written & described & beth &her parents &sister it was great to fall into something like that well done again

i feel chrissy has gone way overboard but the story is really great its interesting to read the next part and find out what is going on at least he has the support of beth and im surprised that he has not found out yet what chrissy has done maybve soon well written

revenge a good word and they deserved it it was intersting that the other one got away with it but is still not sure of his ground will read more in the next part great story welldone

a revenge story wonderfull part i was great am looking foreword to reading the next part shortly

Sweet Revenge is a wonderful story, I did not want it to end

what about jake?where it is going on....?

You can caulk up another one for this author as she continually shows her talents and gift for writing.

Jacki tells of these 2 loosers who seem to find pleasure in taking advantage of some people just because of their looks and find it somewhat amusing when they contanstantly show disregard for others.

When the girls figure out a way to get even with them with the help from someone understanding they not only turn the tables they change the perspective of these boys into something that they never thought could happen to them.

The story like all of Jacki's stories is very well written with so much feeling and heart that it's hard not to want to read more of this authors works. They are long compared to many of the stories that are posted on this site still, her stories make you want to read more and seem to always give you what it is that brings you to them in the first place. I'm never disapointed in Jacki's ability to keep me enthralled with her work and hope she continues to write more enjoyable tales of feminization.

Diane

A beautiful,sweet, romantic TG story. Ilove 'em. I was rather hoping that Cathy and Beth's love would prevail but this did not detract from my pleasure. You are such a good story teller. Thank you.

What a wonderful sweet story, but I can't get part 3 to come up, and can hardly wait to read it.
Hugs, Robin