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Sweet Sixteen
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Comment by DOM on 04/08/14
FIRST READ THIS STORY IN A TV MAGAZINE IN THE U.K IN 2009 REALLY LIKED IT THANK YOU FOR SHARING THESE STORIES Comment by juliej on 04/26/08 as per my previous comments Comment by juliej on 03/07/06 a classic example of bieng forced to do things that you are not wanting to do what a way to set a trap brilliant writing and iwould like to read more but a bit more harsher try to introduce some bondage but again what a great story well done Comment by Shiela Brier on 03/18/05 A LOVELY EXAMPLE OF FORCED SEX CHANGE. YOU ARE ONE OF THE MOST ENJOYABLE STORY TELLERS AROUND..YOU MAKE MY EROTIC DREAMS REALITY. PLEASE CONTINUE TO MAKE MY FANTASIES EXCITING. Comment by Eva on 03/07/05 Great story. I wish you would continue with much much more. Comment by linzi lovsitt on 03/02/05 Couldnt see any guy after he had already seen a blackmailers tape doing what he was told to do especially by a teenager Id have told her to fxxx xxf and packed her off to school in alaska Comment by Arizona1980 on 03/01/05 I've been following you for a while... you seem to have one story every time StorySite updates, so it's not too hard... and I've noticed a trend of yours. You give the female character (don't want to label protagonist or antagonist, because it does change) far too much exposition at the begining for a 3rd person narrative. It leaves an impression that the narrator sympathizes with her, de facto, when most of the time that character is a real bitch. Comment by Stephanie on 02/28/05 Excellent! I just love it that Tom's stepdaughter had taken charge of his so-called powerful life. The use of the security camera in her room to force him into obeying her was very good. His interacting with Kylie's friends on-line made it so much better. Getting him to take the birth control pills to show him the way into womanhood was also very good. Comment by Polly on 02/28/05 When Gwen gets older she'd probably be a great secretary for mommy at work. Comment by Jill M I on 02/27/05 You have created a stimulating premise. Stepfather embarrasses his stepdaughter, doesn’t understand her pain, angry daughter makes him feel her pain first hand. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/27/05 I was really feeling sorry for Tom. I suspect you put in the last minute info about his affair for that very reason. |
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