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The Swing
by Mardee Louise Prynne

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Comment by Molly on 06/23/09
unbelievable

Comment by MaryLou on 06/20/09
quite a story - very imaginative and sensual. thanks

Comment by Gingerfred Man on 05/24/02
I just love this author's work.  The mood and descriptions are outstanding.  Like pervy, I became misoriented when switched from first to third person, but got my bearings and ended up enjoying the story very much.  Very erotic.

Comment by Princess Pervette on 05/23/02
A strange, rather disjointed tale.  She finds she loves her and
then wants to destroy her.  There's a fierce encounter after which
they suddenly turn lovey-dovey again.  And the narrative starts out
in the first person & switches to the third person.  I'm sorry to
see these flaws because there are the makings of a really first-
rate story here.  (Well, one entirely to my taste, anyway.)  The
atmosphere is warm & pleasant, there's no coercion, Aunt Dina seems
a real charmer, guiding & supportive.

--Pervy



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