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The Swing
by Abby Rhodes

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Comment by Silvia. on 04/28/10
Good job.

Comment by riottgrrl on 03/25/04
Countess d'Andruff? Puh-leeze! A stage name for the seamier sort of 'travesti.'

Stil, just enough characters, and you keep the light touch throughout. I don't know if you could make it longer and keep the humor effervescent.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/13/04
Great quicky, Abby, especially the "double crossed" crossdressing.  Maybe it will start a trend.  I have had for awhile some story ideas inspired by Renior's "Jeanne Samaray", "Dancing at the Moulin de la Galette", and "Two Sisters on the Terrace"  (My wife gave me a Renoir 2004 calendar for Christmas  :-)

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