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Take Me Out To The Old Ball Game
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Comment by Angie on 12/15/16
Thanks for a great story, Teddie. The only problem was you stopped too soon! I want to hear how Tammie and Patty resolved their conflict, how the wedding went, all kinds of things. I like your stories! Comment by James on 05/02/13 Hope you do come up with a part three. I really enjoyed reading 1&2. It was a good example of the power of real love. Comment by Janice Lynn on 08/13/07 Loved your story and would like to read some sort of continuation on Tammie's new life with her wife. Your wrote a really sweet and engaging story that gently eased Rich into his new persona. I have never been into the forced or bondage stories and am glad to find one such as yours. Thank you very much. Kisses and hugs and lots of kudos to you, J-Lynn Comment by rone welles on 01/16/07 Thank you for a wonderful story complete and lovely some things can only be hoped for .... Great story great author Comment by Teddie on 01/15/07 Thanks for all the great comments. You never know, I just might come up with a part three. Comment by Jade on 01/15/07 Very good I loved this story and both parts were a very good size that I would enjoy. The only problem was that it was a two parter I thought this would have at least made three parts. Your one of the few talnet writers that still take the time to write stuff for her fans. Even if I don't see these characters again I hope to read more stuff like this from you. Comment by Karen E. Lea on 01/10/07 Hi Teddie, Comment by Cathy on 01/10/07 I thought the story was just great - one of the best I have read. Well written too, just a pleasure to read. Comment by Lauran on 01/07/07 Really nice story, man taking woman's place might not be original, but it is so well done, and like the other said, no nastiness or stupidity. Can't wait to see where it goes. Comment by marcus on 01/07/07 Very enjoyable, well done. Wading through all the female nastiness and male stupidity one usually encounters here makes finding a story like this even better. Comment by Axanar on 01/07/07 I've seen too many, dress him up and sodomize him stories by other authors on these sites. Too many. This is more like it. Not many can pull off stories this loving, fun and meaningful. You can. Please, please, please keep up the INCREDIBLE work!!!!!!!! Comment by ROBERTA on 01/06/07 THIS STORY IS BEST I HAVE SEEN & READ. THE STORY CONTENT IS THE BEST Comment by Barbara Jo on 01/06/07 Wow! What a wonderful story! I had teary eyes a couple of times! |
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