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Taken In
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by Jim on 12/27/09
Thank you. You have written a well rounded story which I liked. Yes, Sandy probable did get off a little too easily.

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 10/26/09
Hi Margaret!
Good story. I liked.
Justice was done. I told you that you can be a good writer if you want, and this story is the proof that I told you.
Silvia.

Comment by julie j on 09/24/04
this story is brilliant the way it worked out was grat one of your best so far i feel the way henry sorted it all out was excellent no wanton revenge but through the legal system well done another great story i feel &thinh your writing is amongst the best i have read so far thankyou

Comment by Early June on 09/08/04
This is probably your best.  It displays your tale telling talent. Of course I like happy endings.  This story had that as well as justice. Thank you for sharing with us.

Comment by Jenna on 09/06/04
very nice I love happy endings. Just two things though I think Sandy got off way too easy, after allshe was the one who arranged for the perm makeup and it's just that a person is marked for life. removal leaves scaring. Also I seem to recall a comment that other wives had sent thire men here to be *conditioned* I think Sandy (and other for aiding etc) quite probally thire lives didn't work out so nice.
Just some thughts I loved the story but I still dodn't know why the wife didn't just get a divorce? must have been really greedy.

Comment by Rhonda on 09/06/04
This was suck a wonderful story!  I am suach a sucker for a happy ending. he he.
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could all find loving caring mates that are accepting of our gender needs.  Thank you for the enjoyable ride and a soft sweet cry at the outcome.

Comment by Francine on 09/05/04
Hi Margaret  :)

A very delightful story and wonderfully told.
Thank you
Hugs,Fran

Comment by alison on 09/05/04
What a great story, i enjoy your writing so much, keep up the good work.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 09/05/04
Brill loved it



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