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A Tale From The Wall
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Comment by Angie on 03/07/14
Valentina, this was an incredible story. It may be a fiction, but it made me cry. Thank you so much for sharing your creativity with all of us. Comment by Darin on 01/05/13 I almost cried in citirque today, too, Ruth. Lines, shapes, forms, rule of thirds, team work, patience, love for photography and perserverance, all shine here. I'm so glad all these concepts came out of my mouth directly to this very talented little gentleman's heart. Because this photo is pure heart.Thanks for this amazing opportunity! Comment by Silvia. on 12/17/12 You are terrific! Amazing! Comment by Silvia. on 12/17/12 You are great! Comment by Sandianne on 03/19/09 Valentina - Your story awakened many memories. I served in the "Forgotten War" - Korea. I did not have the fortune to meet an Eileen or a Patty. But I sure do remember the daily, continuing fear of being outed. I was certain I was the only one in my division who had the need to crossdress. Now, I realize years later that if we are 3% of male society, there must have been a dozen sisters within a mile radius. Comment by Stanley Morton on 11/24/07 Tina, my brother Bob served in the Viet Nam War. I don't know much but that he was a cook like my Dad was in W.W. 2 I feel sorry for Ellen, all she wanted was to be Daddy's Girl. At least Billie gave her comfort and she died a heriones death. Me, I hope that all trans-sexual women find that Daddy wants their Princess. Comment by Jenelle on 01/25/06 Dear Valentina, Comment by Susan Vasquez on 02/15/03 I just read your story and wanted to compliment you on a touching and wonderful story. Though I never served I was able to relate to both your characters. I relate with Eileen especially since I myself am in nursing school. I understand the rejection of a father so your portrayal of the emotions involved was almost too realistic. I hope you continue to write quality work as this story shows. Thank you. Comment by Briar on 02/08/03 Yes I can only echo what has already been written about how sensitive and well written this was. It had me in tears. I dont think the story needed the last sentence, where the presumed father of Eilean tturned upp at the wall. This wouldnt have happened and it wasnt needed in the story - I understand the need to hope for such a reconciliation, even when it is not going to happen, though. Comment by Joanna on 12/14/02 I was trained, tested, and packed to go to se asia, but they held us up, but anyway, will have to go back and finish the story later, once emotions settle down, was crying too hard to finish it the first time. You've written a wonderful, realistic, work. Thank you. Comment by Mary Alice on 12/10/02 Thanks for writing such a sensitive & caring piece....those of us who travel these roads find our lives entwined with the caring & gentleness that being "gender enhanced" brings to us if we are open to it. Comment by Alyssa Davis on 12/10/02 One of the finest stories I've read! Had me in tears..... Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/10/02 My dears what a great story .All those who have served ones country but who has feminine feellings and more will know what such people go though .This story shows warmth love and understanding in the one place you would expect to find such things a war.This is one of the best storys I have read for a long time. I dont know how that war affected the people in the story I am English but I have known people good friends who have been in the services who are TG .This speaks for them.Keep up the good work .You touched me and more with this story than any other story I have read. Comment by Pervette on 12/10/02 Terrific story. Something for everybody here: CDers, TSs, and Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 12/10/02 I cried. You are an exceptional author Valentina to be able to write two so very excellent but so very different stories as "Best Served Cold" and "A Tale from the Wall" Comment by Caitlin Rose on 12/10/02 This is a wonderful story. Even though I was a devout "peacenik" during the Viet Nam war, I found myself crying at parts of this story. I even found the information about Barry Goldwater interesting. I knew he was K7UGA, but didn't know he was active in MARS. Comment by kr on 12/10/02 I thought Heinlein's "The Number of the Beast" was written in the 1970's, and according to all the sites I've checked, the paperback version I have is one of his earliest, dating from 1980. My best guess is Val forgot when TNOTB was published, and thought it was a decade earlier than it was. Aside from that nitpick (of interest mostly to those absorbed with minutae of Heinlein's books) I find this 'pg' look at CDs and TSs in the military in the early '70s enjoyable. I expected/hoped Eileen could help Bill explain Billie to Molly, forgetting the arbitrary "your number has now been called" nature of death in wartime, especially the "one minute in the jungle being shot at, the next downtown in a big city miles from anything so 'un-genteel' as war" which many accounts of VietNam give to that experience. I'd dropped into the story so much I forgot where Bill was when the flashback/memory hit. |
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