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Tales From Girly Camp
by Jeff Stephanie Sevem

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Comment by MaryLou on 06/20/09
what a fantastic journey to a beautiful life. thank you

Comment by Pervette on 05/02/03
I wasn't going to say anything more about spelling...but there's
one howler that you really had better do something about:

> He is in a juvenile dentition center and is seeing a doctor
> daily.

You mean Ben knocked his teeth out?  :-)  (Go & look up "dentition"
in the dictionary!)

Pervy

Comment by Pervette on 05/01/03
I'm still working my way through these delightful stories.  But
so far...
.
I just *love* it when someone addresses a familiar theme in a
completely new way.  I love it even more when it's a theme I've
toyed with myself.  Somewhere (Fictionmania?) there's a story of
mine called "Camp Trans."
.
I must confess, I like the narration & the conversation in my story
better than in yours.  (And the spelling, too.)  BUT...your story
is ever so much more inventive, & you've found activities for your
girls that I never dreamed of.  (Why didn't I ever give my girly
boys makeovers?  Or have them learn to make dresses?)  So I think
you come out way ahead here.
.
Great work!
.
--Pervy

Comment by Sharonn on 05/01/03
Your stories were a curious mixture of good punctuation and poor spelling.  Poor spelling detracts from the enjoyment of any written piece.  I'm the worlds worst typist so it takes forever to put anything down on paper but I edit before I transmit it.  There are many spell check programs available.  The basic stories were good. Thank you for sharing them with us.

Comment by Paula on 04/30/03
Both parts were truely wonderful and well worth the read



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