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Tales of the Season - Darla's Story
by Tigger

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Comment by Starbuck on 11/20/08
I am thoroughly enjoying this series, though I must agree with the earlier comment that this particular story leaves me wanting a bit more.

Events with the brother were rather anti-climactic, although I will say that his end was rather fitting...

Hmmm.... maybe...  I have this strange urge to 'fanfic' this ep, just to see what I can do...

SB


Comment by stanley morton on 06/24/07
That "asshole big brother" raping poor Darryl makes me very angry! I wish that Darryl had the chance to destroy his brother. Now jane has 3 special girls to call her daughters. Personally, Losing Season Michelle needs to be made part of the series, not an alternate history.

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 04/09/04
Tigger:

  This was fun and eminently readable. The words just flowed off the page. You had me worried at several points and once again everything was hanging in the balance. The reality of Darla's emotional state or lack of emotion and reaction made me very curious and added to my enjoyment.

  It did seem a little short and not fully developed. But everything did fit in. I guess I like more internal dialog, but the story was still a delight. Very nice tale.

Hugs,

Kristi

Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/08/02
A wonderful story that had captivated me in so many ways. I found this story to be extremely well written and one of the more memorable stories written by one of the best authors on the site.

Diane



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