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Tammi - The New Maid
by Karen Anne Summerfield

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Comment by Kitty on 04/17/09
Your description of "A fairly happy girl," I saw no such happiness in this story mew, I feel your tags are misplaced and your synopsis is as well. I don't blame  you mew, I think you should just fix that so as not to confuse your readers about the true nature of this story.

Comment by christine01 on 11/24/07
Forced sexual reassignment surgery on a child!!!!! enforced prostitution and torture?
Karen Anne summerfield seems very quick to judge others work as kiddie porn and unacceptable but this so called story is not any different. This should be removed!!!!!!!!!
Its sickening KAREN ANNE
You hurt me

Comment by julie j on 01/07/05
i think this story is great but to short much motre needed for this to be even better than now well written &described but a wicked stepmother &sisters no thanks

Comment by GERRI D on 11/04/04
GREAT I HOPE YOU WRITE A FOLLOW UP

Comment by jasmine on 05/21/04
I hope that you didn’t take my comments the wrong way. Most of your stories have a dark premise but this had to be the darkest. Tammi really has no reason to remain living and she will realize that. She has no escape because of that law and that device attached to her nervous system. Real tears were rolling out of my eyes. It is all legal, I wish you explained that because I don’t understand. If this in in the US then the law would be overturned as would most civilized countries. I don’t see congress and the stated overriding the thirteenth amendment any time soon. Thank god for that.
it was a well written story but it disturbed me and i felt great sorrow for tammi.

Comment by jasmine on 05/21/04
What a sad ending. This poor girl will surly kill herself within the next several years. She has been abandoned and is shown absolutely no love or compassion at all. in fact her sister goes out of her way to make sure that she has it as hard as possible. She really has no reason to live. What a sad story. by the end i was crying.
where is this happening. if here what happened to the 13 admendment. no law that leagalizes slavery can override that.

Comment by martira on 11/02/03
A great story that is very well written. It has all the right ingredients. I only wish that Tammi still had his boy parts while locked in a chastity.



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