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Tammy True
by Angel O'Hare

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Comment by rose "AKA zach" pantoja on 12/03/11
OMG i loved this story it made me cry i needed this to pik me up out of my depression you need to write more i need you to write more plzzzzzzzz

Comment by Silvia  (from Brazil) on 06/26/10
I think that Greta, Megan, Mrs. Logitech, Mrs. Perkins, Mr. withers and Angela, they all should go to prison for life, for what they did to TC!
Megan and Mrs. Logitech, should be transformed into men, and they should have been sent to a prison for men.
Silvia.

Comment by stephen on 03/14/09
thats another one. i love your story's and when that it get going you stop. you build in something in you long story's where you want to find out what happens next. i always hope for him/her and often cry with them. please carry on and finish these story's. you have a very good idea(apart of too much god thing). as a tg i know.

Comment by karenallen on 01/30/09
you touched my heart, please do more of tammy i read this and a summers odyssey byjennifer sue my depression was sent away thank you

Comment by Karen Trexler on 01/04/08
I liked the fact that the strory was realistic, but I can't help wondering if Tammy was ever rewarded with the computer games she wanted when they were in the big city, or was she just so excited about her new role that she forgot all about them?

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 11/06/07
ME, I WONDER WHAT T.C. DOES NEXT. DOES HE GO BACK TO BEING A BOY AFTER THE CONTRACT EXPIRES OR DOES HE DECIDE TO DRESS AS A GIRL OR BECOME A GIRL. ANY ONE OF THE THREE ARE POSSIBLE. THE ONLY ONE I DREAD IS IF HE DECIDES TO SUICIDE. ANGEL, WILL YOU PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY?

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/17/07
POOR T.C. IF 9/11 HAD NOT HAPPENED, HE WOULDN'T BE IN THIS REVOLTING MESS. I SEE THAT IN THIS STORY, YOU ARE USING FOUL LANGUAGE. A CHANGE FROM YOUR USUAL WAY OF WRITING.

Comment by Bashful Little Lorna on 08/05/06
I confess, I was REALLY peeved with the needless, childish, shock-value, hackneyed re-use of four-letter words in each paragraph. There are better ways to indicate disgust.

Comment by rone on 01/04/06
lovely story    .....  clean fun  and needs to be finished ,,
shure wish everybody could write like this ,,you have a uneeek way with words and make them very interesting ...what else can I say but  Thank You  Thank  You     Rone

Comment by Joseph F.Feldman on 09/07/05
Hey, I really liked this story.  Crap and double crap, write some more about Tammy.  

Comment by Paula on 01/30/03
look forward to what comes next.

Comment by Ashley on 01/29/03
I like it - I can't wait for the next chapter!  



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