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Tango
by Oak

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Comment by Tammy-Louise Evans on 08/19/10
Exceptionally well written, utterly charming and a uniquely presented tale that allows us gender-gifted folk to relate to both parties.

I long to read more stories in this genre, where grace, manners and self control shape our thoughts and actions.

Thank you for sharing your abundant talent with us. I hope that I may be priveleged to find more of your work soon.

Kindest regards
Tammy-Louise


Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 01/20/10
Hi Oak!
You wrote a Great and lovely story.I really liked your story.
Keep writing.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Marsha Aiubrey on 06/19/08
  Dear Oak,     How refreshing, to see an old-fashioned love story with a TG theme.  Loved how you drew out the characters, very human and lifelike.  I especially loved that the male protagonist was a gentleman of the old school, full of old world courtliness.  How could our lovely TG character not fall hopelessly in love with him.  It was so nice to read a story filled with love and gentleness.  I much prefer reading this type of story as opposed to the seemingly run of the mill forced feminization stories that seem to contain violence and self loathing.  Many people like that sort of thing.  I don't.  My dear, your story was a breath of fresh air.  Thank you.

Comment by Tamara Segunda on 06/21/07
Brava, my dear! Brava!  A fine, well-wrought love story with a T theme, and with an element I had almost despaired of seeing here ever again -- originality.  My congratulations on your work and your talents, and my thanks for sharing them with us.  With sincere best wishes,
.......Tamara Segunda.

Comment by Bobbie Ann on 06/09/07
Oak, Your story is beautiful. Thank you. Bobbie Ann

Comment by Kristi Lynne Fitzpatrick on 06/08/07
   The emotional and physical dance going on in this story is marvelous. And the speech of someone from Argentina as presented in this tale is very convincing to me, as well as the hot Latin passion.  To see true respect for womankind is refreshing and even thrilling. I think the relationship here is so joyful and happy without being the least little bit sappy.

   This is an excellent tale by any measure and I am so glad you shared and so glad I found it.

   Hugs,

   Kristi


Comment by Joni W on 06/07/07
Bravo! Very well done.

It is so lovely to see such a well written story book tale that ends with a happy ending. So few stories written of late, end with a happy ending.

This was a delicious romantic and heart warming story. I am happy for both of the characters. I believe they both found what they needed to find. Too bad real life can't always be like this.

Very well done. I look forward to reading future stories from you. Please keep up the good work. A job very well done.

Hugs
Joni W


Comment by Karen E. Lea on 06/07/07
Hi,

A great, well written and edited story. Well done.

Karen.


Comment by Andrea Foster on 06/06/07
This an exceptional story, and I enjoyed it very much. It is well-written and sensitive, but the unusual viewpoint really makes it stand out.

Comment by Kay Whitefield on 06/04/07
Oak,
I have appreciated your very sensitive and well written story.  I felt I was seeing your images as  you wrote about dancing, trying on clothes, Emerald's return to Eduardo, standing at the door; I saw the pictures strongly at first reading and even at  this moment.  Your writing evokes physicality!!!  And your narrative is passionate!!.  So I have  enjoyed your story.  Thank you so much.

On another subject, and possibly related, one of my birth names is Oakley.  I have always valued the realization that the oak tree is a tree sacred to the Druids.  I feel a deep spiritual connection to my druidic heritage.  My family roots go back to southern England.  Do you share any of this connection?

Love and encouragement,

Kay


Comment by Patrice Faul on 06/03/07
I don't know if  this is your first or fiftith story - I know this story is well crafted.  You developed the characters, the scenes and background very well.
I enjoyed it...I am looking forward to your next story.

Comment by Francine on 06/03/07
A Lovely Tale

Thank you so much.

Hug, Fran




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