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Tango Revisted
by Oak

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Comment by Steve on 11/28/10
Loved every line. Thank you and one well put together story. It kept me reading right through and left me wanting more. That is a sign of a good story teller and that is indeed praise.

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 01/21/10
Hi Oak!
As always you wrote a good story. I really loved.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Briar on 07/24/09
This, and the first tale of Emerald and Eduardo were real fun.  I do so love it when the nasty people get their cumuppance and the nice people come out on top for a change.  Of course, in Real Life we all know that things dont work out that way, but that is another good reason why we all NEED stories like yours to read.  

I liked how Emerald developed through the story, it is not easy to create a 4-dimensional person character in a story, only good authors ever succeed in doing it, and you did it.  Well done, and thank you for sharing it with us.

XXX

Briar


Comment by cindy on 06/17/09
Hi what a lovely lovely story, I read from start to finish and you have lots of talent, please continue writing. I only have one request, could you add pretty aprons in your storys, aprons worn because they wanted to wear pretty aprons, thank you cindy



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