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Comment by Elizabeth Cathryn Mystery on 10/08/23
Well we all want a bit more of a story, thus this is one possible extension. I feel that if De Anne breasts get any bigger they will become a problem. Lastly, the only thing that I found I did not gel with was the Osama Bin Laden change, but then we are all different. Comment by anonymous reviewer on 04/13/15 I don't think Bob Hope would've liked this title. Comment by Silvia. on 05/12/13 Very, very bad story!!!! Comment by Elaine on 07/08/06 Where can I get my own Dean? Wholeman this one was amazing, I enjoyed some of the others you have written, but this one... WOW! This one has got to be one of my favorite short stories. Like someone commented about one of your other stories, even without the sex this makes an absolutly wonerful (even if would make it a bit confusing) story. This one deserves a bold Sweet/Sentimental. Comment by Wholeman on 10/20/03 Jezzi Comment by Dave H on 12/27/02 Nice one. You can't beat a nice really big pair of boobs to give a story a bit of an uplift. Like I said; nice one. Comment by DeeDee Clark on 08/10/02 I really enjoyed this story. I thought it was very very funny. I had tears from laughing. everything was so preposterous. I throughly enjoyed this story. I recommend it for lighting up a rainy day. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/31/02 1) So there never was a real assassination plot, Sophie set everything up just so she could get Diane exclusively? Why not just have Dean assassinated? |
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