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Tanks For The Mammaries
by Wholeman

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Comment by Elizabeth Cathryn Mystery on 10/08/23
Well we all want a bit more of a story, thus this is one possible extension.  I feel that if De Anne breasts get any bigger they will become a problem.  Lastly, the only thing that I found I did not gel with was the Osama Bin Laden change, but then we are all different.

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I talked with Diane and asked her to get everyone a platinum set of 'wings' broaches to signify they are official angles.  We wear them everyday, well, when we are clothed that is.  I made Diane have a larger broach as she is Queen, Angle one.  Secretly Gretchen is Angle 2 because she is the one that rescued me even if Diane was the one that reeked vengeance to get me.  Diane made a paper on me about my pheromone phenomena but the government stopped her publishing it.  Turns out the Government want to use it for their nefarious schemes. They want to infect a women, send her out to an offending country, have sex with all the government officials, infect them, then she leaves the country leaving all the heads to die a horrible death.  Of course the lady is made to be a total stunner so no one can say no to her even the female officials.  The only thing turned off in the ladies is their uterus so they cannot conceive, but it can be turned back on in the tank.  The ladies love it, no periods to keep track of.

One thing we play at some times is for all my Angels to carry me about as if I am a child.  I get around quicker sometimes and they hand me over to each other.  I like this as I can get a quick or a long grope in, of their breasts, kiss/lick their necks and a few other things.  Due to this they go braless quite often.  Well in fact quite often so they go around the complex showing off a fine pair of 'buttons' and 'jiggling all the way' at times due to the fact they are so used to being braless they forget to put one on.

I am to go back in the tank to get a breast reduction at some time and if I want to be given an extra 8 inches in height along with being made more robust.  I am weighing this up as actually I really like my size now, but I would like to be more robust.  I am also looking at getting really really dark brown hair (not black) but keeping my eye colour.

Diane is looking at making a vaccine for my condition.  She could turn it off when I go back in the tank but that may affect the family harmony.  I am also thinking of tuning down my sensitivity, but again we all like it so I have some deep thinking to do.

Gretchen got into the swing of things very quickly and she especially loves Diane and I.  I make sure everyone gets a share of me.  That said, I love all my angles and my angles love me.  (Well, everyone loves everyone.)

So we earn our keep attending to anyone that comes in and out of the tank, obtaining information from the terrorists or other nasty persons, changing the sex for witness protection persons and anything Diane or the team thinks up that may help us to perform better or helps the government.  One thing we are considering doing is changing the sex of nasty rapists, that should change their ways especially when Diane changes their mind set  to say, being a prostitute.  Thus we pay our way.  Oh, I found out Diane was crafty when she confessed to harvested my semen before I went into the tank.  Just in case.  It would be interesting to see Diane pregnant.  The baby would have a lot of aunties.......  If she did have a baby it would have to be a girl.


Comment by anonymous reviewer on 04/13/15
I don't think Bob Hope would've liked this title.

Comment by Silvia. on 05/12/13
Very, very bad story!!!!

Comment by Elaine on 07/08/06
Where can I get my own Dean? Wholeman this one was amazing, I enjoyed some of the others you have written, but this one... WOW! This one has got to be one of my favorite short stories. Like someone commented about one of your other stories, even without the sex this makes an absolutly wonerful (even if would make it a bit confusing) story. This one deserves a bold Sweet/Sentimental.

Comment by Wholeman on 10/20/03
Jezzi
Please reread the story, you missed several things.  
1.) The reason no assassination was attempted was that Diane had friends who would eventually find out that he was killed.  Since Sophie didn't want that to happen, he was done in such a way that would look to be a judicial mistake.
2.) What was the use that they were putting their toy to?  They were using it to transform spies into tiny nymphos, to get them to tell everything they knew, and to punish them and to remove them as a threat for all time.
3.) The high heel foot was Sophie’s doing.
4.) Her skeletal structure was reinforced to support the weight.  The reason was simply that the tank doesn’t leave scars and that Sophie would die if they tried.  If lactating breasts have surgery done on them they tend to stop lactating.
5.) Sophie was punished for attempted murder by the person who loved the potential victim so much that she couldn’t bear to force him to give up his life and go into hiding with her.  I think that attempted murder is slightly more serious than cold coffee.

Wholeman

Comment by Dave H on 12/27/02
Nice one.  You can't beat a nice really big pair of boobs to give a story a bit of an uplift.  Like I said; nice one.

Comment by DeeDee Clark on 08/10/02
I really enjoyed this story. I thought it was very very funny. I had tears from laughing. everything was so preposterous. I throughly enjoyed this story. I recommend it for lighting up a rainy day.

DeeDee Clark

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/31/02
1)  So there never was a real assassination plot, Sophie set everything up just so she could get Diane exclusively?  Why not just have Dean assassinated?  
2)  Why was Dean made so small and into a sex toy?  Why isn't he outraged; Diane assured him no one messed with his mind, but he is reacting to being turned into a woman, let alone a sex toy woman, way too easily.  His perkiness is way too over the top.  
3)  And it was a kindness to make it uncomfortable for him to be barefoot?  What if no shoes are available?  
4)If (s)he's less than 4' tall with M cup breasts, she'd fall over; she can't be comfortable with them no matter how sensative they are.  Also why would she have to go back into the tank to correct that; simple breast reduction surgery should do it.
5)  The nurses and,if he's smart, Dean him(?)self, have good reason to be scared of Diane.  Her revenge on Sophie borders on the sadistic.  Bring her coffee that's too cold and you end up looking like a greyhound and get shipped off to a track somewhere in Wisconsin.  BTW, if she has the power she seems to have, why couldn't she exercise some of the options other than transforming Dean?  Why would it have been bad to have taken him with her into hiding?

This, so far, is a potentially good story that unfortunately goes beyond the normal suspension of disbelief a reader has to have for almost all TG fiction stories.



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