Great start to a story which is more in my taste then many others here. Please do pick it up again.

One of the best starts to a story I've found.  It's a shame that the next few installments never came to fruition.  

This is very naughty of you, to start off what is clearly a well written and exciting story with this TEASER, and then to abandon it.

Of course, there may be circumstances, like you were found out and the people in charge of you smashed up your computer, or did you such harm that you are no longer able to type, or write, or think properly...  I do most sincerely hope that NONE of these dreadful fates apply though.  

Were I not an atheist I would pray for you, instead I wish very very hard that you are alright.  But please, dont leave everyone in suspense like this!

Love,

Briar

Do write more; you do good!

To paraphrase Oliver Twist, "Please, ma'am, may I have some MORE?!?!"  You've left us hanging here, and you write so well!  

I could have just cried when I got to the end of the second part.I was left so up in the air and wanting more. I can't wait till I can read the further adventures of Carol and Tanya.
You have written a beautiful story, and one I cant wait to continue reading, and wishing, if only:
Hugs and Kisses

Please continue as I look forward to further installments.

Please more !!!!!! and if you don't I'm going to toss everything away and say "never again"  .... ok so I lied, but please more

Great start. I can hardly wait for the next installment.

this story is getting better, I'm hanging on every word, checking once a week for updates. you have me captivated!

well???????  pleasse finish.

Wonderful writingsweetie. I love the way Carlo and Carol dialogue. Please continue, slowly and deliciously.

Love your story line Sweetie. Please continue with Carol's lovely adventures with Tanya!  Hugs & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

A very nice story indeed. Both characters well fleshed out for such a short pair of stories. Please continue as I look forward to further installments.
I missed the first, but read it before the second.
Loved your description of Tanya when she came over on Christmes Eve.
Wishing you all my best for the coming Holidays
Hugs
Lee

such an awesome start, oh please make it a series!

it is good

A wonderful story.

But please, my sister, don't leave us hanging at the door out in the rain.

Please finish this beautiful tale.

Ellie

more!  very good start that promises so much.  Good descriptions, kep it coming, please