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many unanswered things like,...where did her purse and car go?

Dear Tara,
  Your story was so well written, and composed, that I can't help
suspecting that this tale is not fiction at all! It's too bad that your Mistress won't let you share the rest of the story with us!

The story so far is really freaky. In a good way though. Reading it I'm like damnnn this could be a horror movie with Dominica as the psycho! :)

excelllent story very wicked the way she done him like a kipper and now she controls him how long before it goes a lot further i wonder next part please

I agree with those who have left comments. PLEASE write more. Can't wait. Ingrid

Very Nice, i love the way You tell the story. When i close my eyes after i have read a chapter i am totally in. MORE PLEASE.

Pamela

Love the way the male starts to slowly accept his new lot in life. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Part 1 was great, hooked me in for  the second part, each step here was well thought out, and was a great read. so many of us closet crossers fantazie about this same story. I hope there will be a part three and  this sissy hopes it will be very soon.

Sorry to inject a sour note, but the end of Part 2 marks about the
spot where Tara should begin figuring out how to kill her neighbor.
"Mistress," or Dom or whatever, has already done a couple of things
that might well have landed Tara in the emergency room. There's a
point where you have to start considering survival. It may be too
late for that in Tara's case; but if her life is going to be
destroyed, she would do well to take "Mistress" along with her....
I'm afraid I don't take kindly to coercion.
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--Pervy

Part 2 was 'tres bonne'.....sometimes english just too puny for a task! anyway Tara here are misprints/typos you may wanna fix: paragraph 6 'proofed=proved' para 9 'menues=menus or menu's' and 'phantasies=fantasies' para 10 'starring=staring' para 13 'tight not= tight knot' para 15 'noice=noise' and 'I butt plug=a butt plug'
para 16 'purched=pursed' para 17 'at least she= at last she' para 18 'ask her fer a=ask her for a' ....

What a wonderfully told story.  I loved part one and how he was slowly but surely drawn out in public.  You''re a very talented writer even if the number of reviews don't reveal that.  This is one of the better stories I've read.  Thank you for sharing it with us.

Hugs -- Kelly

A wonderful story<s>. i hope that You will continue it. i found myself suffering thru the humiliation and fear along with Tara and felt the thrills she must also have felt.Please don't stop now. Please show me how she is changed into a slut,,,,, and please give me the number of " Dom" <w>

A very good start to what looks to be a great story. Hope to see more of it soon.

Allie

Tara, this is an absolutely fabulous story, and i marvel that no one has commented on it yet! Over 1700 reads and no recognition of the quality of the work! Tara finds herself in a terrible situation, through no fault of her own, and the actions of the patrons at the Odin are typically crudely and selfish.....i was ANGRY for the poor thing! Obviously, there is more coming in this story, and hope the craft that you displayed thus far is kept up! You're an excellent writer (i say this as someone reads alot!) and will become fluid as you do more.....i find it hard to believe this is your first story (you, maybe, write for non tg venues?) as you do so well. Looking ahead to next chapter of Tara's adventures, and hope/worry until i find out how she survives the dangers.