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Tea for Two
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Comment by Jill M I on 10/20/04
Jennifer - Comment by SassySue on 09/14/03 I agree with the other comments especially that there was no reason to rate it X and that Jan's motivations were confused if she didn't want a lesbian relationship but she wanted to change Adam into a women. Comment by Night Wolf on 09/09/03 I have to agree that having Jan start the date stating that it wasn't a test and then stating that it was is not right! I respect women who want someone that will not control them! Though you mention that was her motive behind all this you never really showed us that it truly happen to her. I know if I was put on the spot like adam was I would be willing to do the same type of thing for the one I loved but lets say they find out that it not meant to be, and he been taking all that stuff to the point of no return that shows that she has control everything and I don't agree with that! A realtionship in my eyes should try to be very close to a full 50/50 equaled realtionship where no one is controling the other! Comment by Geena on 09/06/03 The ending was to wrong. Jan says she prefers a man's body over Wendy's female one, but here she is changing Adam to a girl. Comment by Jimmy on 09/05/03 Now, can Jan pass the "fidelity test?" Comment by Denise Em on 09/05/03 Jennifer, Comment by Jimmy on 09/04/03 What did Jan give up for this relationship? And if she didn't want a woman for a partner, why did she in the end of the story want to make Adam a girl? And BTW: did not one of the girls notice Adam's adam's apple? |
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