Another good story  Janet, there was lots of tense action from father as he didn't want to loose his description of a son.  It reminds me of how my own father would cause 10 times more flak about anything that he was against, when he couldn't be bothered to discuss it he would say "it's my way as long as you live under this roof." or "when I'm gone you can do what ever you want."  

I've throughly enjoyed every one of your stories that I've read.

I have read many of your stories but this one must be one of your best. Diane was convicted in all ways to become a girl and eventually was accepted by her parents. God/mother nature can make mistakes and although a story it is good to read how one woman can be true to her sex. Thanks.

FROM PETER TO DIANE, SHE BLOSSOMS AS FAMILY AND FRIENDS ACCEPT HER. MOM GIVES HER ADVICE ON BEING A WOMAN AND HER FRIENDS HELP HER BLOSSOM. BUT THERE IS MORE TO TELL HERE. COMPLETE AS IS JANET, BUT "MORE TERMS OF LIFE" NEEDS TELLING. JANET, YOU TELL OF THE ANGST DIANE FEELS . MY YOUR LIGHT SHINE  

Another strong story, believable and one I could relate to

Keep them coming

luv

Paula

Clearly one of your best to date. I can honestly say that those likeing this type of story will be happy with it's contents. I could see myself as Peter changing into Diane.

The start of the story with Peter going out for the very first time and the rapid progression of his change into Diane is done very well.

I still find a few things within the authors story such as a misspelled word or two but, hey, who can fault this terrific writer who continues to give us so many contented hours of reading pleasure.

Diane

This looks like your very best to date.  The father's reaction is
especially well done and convincing.  Fathers in fiction are so
often easily talked around, as they never would be in real life.
This father is never really reconciled, and the ill will with which
he finally accepts the inevitable is extremely well done.  Sure,
it's fun when the hero(ine) can change effortlessly, surrounded
by understanding and encouraging family, and I enjoy that, too.
But it's well to be reminded, occasionally, that real life isn't
like that.  My congratulations on a truly excellent story.

Pervy