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Terrace View Apartments
by Sean McBride

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Comment by Silvia. on 06/17/12
Very bad.

Comment by sissyirene on 04/17/09
What is it with this fascination with ingesting urine and fecal material? YUK!!!!! That is the only down side in an otherwise extremely erotic story.  I have read parts 1 -5 and am anxiously getting to the remaining parts.

Sissyirene


Comment by gail on 03/12/03
What great story, I would love to be in state but it is a great story so keep writing Love Gail

Comment by Pussyboy on 09/20/01
Fantastic stories.  Love the fantasy elements where the action goes "a little over the top".  I'd love it if you took it even further to make the S&M elements even stronger and to make the situations even more humiliating and painful.

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 07/31/01
[After Installment 5:]  Rough and scary, but exciting.  What a
life!

Pervy

Comment by Susan on 06/24/01
Very nice story, please keep on going, I can't wait what will happen to him next.Will he danielle again ?
Susan



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