good story it amazing how things can evolve

Shirley, Debbie and Robyn should have being arrested and sentenced to death for what they did to Pat.
Very bad story.

quite a good story was not sure how pat did not notice the changes to his body before being told after he had made his wish very good cocept this has scope for a lot more detail and parts how he completes his transition and how he coped etc

Interesting story with a happy ending for the protaganist, although I'm not so sure that his girlfriend was too pleased.

I have to agree with Jezzi, that it was nice that there was no humiliation involved.

Keep up the good work.

SS

Catherine, What a marvelous story! Your description of the details associated with each step in the feminization process made me feel part of the scene.

<<  Since we only lived in a one-bedroom apartment, it was next to impossible to get away from them.  >>

Why didn't he just go out when the women were there?

I did like the fact that the girls didn't humiliate him,and treated him like an equal girlfriend as the feminization continued.  This is probably why he was grateful rather than resentful.