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Terrified Tina
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Comment by Bruce on 06/28/09
another women have to totally win to the point of overkill, well done but another nightmare i have to try to get out of my head just because he wanted to break it off, he didnt even cheat or embarass her what a bitch and even worse now what other plans of revenge does she still have in store for Tina this gets worse by the minute Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/08/02 For a somewhat short story writer this author puts out a lot of information for her readers. I enjoyed the forced methods that were used to transform this character and the reasons for doing it were well thought out. Comment by Amber Chalise on 08/15/02 I agree with some of the other comments about seeing more of tina. I would love if a rewrite happened of the first 2 chapters detailing what happened to tim while tina was active. Comment by Chastity Anne on 08/06/02 I truly love the direction that this story is heading toward as I look forward to your next chapter where I have no doubt that Sherry will have thoroughly had her way with Tim ... enslaving "Tina" to her will ... as she makes Tina endure that which she feels that he has brought on to "herself" ... I do hope that you spare Tina no mercy over this next 2-week period ... Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 08/03/02 I guess the bitch wins. I think I'll pass on anymore of Tina. It's too bad, because you're a really good writer, but if I want to see the bad guys win, I'll watch the news. Comment by Gidget on 08/03/02 Maybe you could write more about what Tina's life is like when Tim is not around. Just so we get Tina's day to day life, what Tim is doing without his knowledge. Please! Comment by Diane on 08/03/02 OHHHH how i loved your stories. I would love to be Tina, only I would not fight it. Please keep up the good work. I have be a cd for years and though I have been out on many occassions Iknow I am read so I only allow my friends to take me to safe bars or clubs. And it is hard here in Minnesota, there arent to many girls here. Hugs Diane Comment by Bobbi on 08/03/02 Please write more....please... |
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