Just NICE   a wonderfully woven story of pure erotic pleasure..All happy all sexy all bi    I left a printed copy of this on my desk for my wife to read   I found it in the waste  basket!  but she left me an email asking if I wanted to be Terri......I settled for leelee and the joy of wearing lingerei around the house...a secret until she read this story!  thanks  I want more

Uhm, a minor annoyance, but a growing irritation:

"your" = 2nd person possessive: "Your breasts and my breasts."

"you're" = contraction of "you are": "First, you're passable."

At least you're consistent, but it is becoming increasingly annoying to keep running into stuff like "First, your passable."

One small suspension of disbelief problem: in the story, a medical doctor tells the main character about another TG patient. IANAL but, in the Real World[TM], a breach of confidentiality like that would leave a doctor liable to a law suit, and could cost her her license to practice medicine. No doctor would do it, even if the people involved know each other, without signed releases and some very good reasons.

Otherwise, I think this story is very well written, and the author's later work only gets better. However, mistakes like the above really spoil things, which is why published fiction authors do research and/or write about what they know.

an intresting story but hard work reading it i will reread at a later date &give another comment

How yummy and loving can you get?   Where do I sign up to get into this story myself?

Love and Huggs,
Sheryl

I liked the way the story flowed.  It was all very orderly and easy to follow.  Thanks for writing it!

I liked this very much, extremely well written, without holes in the storyline.  Will be watching for more Teddi,

Excellent story!  Very well written and very hot.  I wish we could follow around Terrie and her wild sex adventures.  Oh wait, I think there is a story or two on this site involving lesbian shemales. ;-)  Be well!