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Tessa Arrives
by Tessa Panties

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Comment by juliej on 02/29/08
next part please

Comment by Bobbie on 08/13/07
Oh my gosh nearly two months ago you started and now what must we do

to get some follow up.  I am sure everyone that has read this

opening is waiting with their minds in a jumble as to how things

will proceed please don't keep us in suspence much longer.

Bobbie


Comment by Janie on 06/23/07
Why keep us all on tenterhooks? Good start tho

Comment by Staci on 06/23/07
And then...?  Are you drinking beer when you write?  You know, easily distracted, can't finish what you start.  My gosh, your "story" is nothing more than a teaser at the beginning of a news cast.  Tell us 15 times that there's something magically different about tonight's weather, and put it off and off and off, and pretty soon I fall asleep waiting for the big deal.  So when will we get your big deal?

Comment by Mandi on 06/21/07
I think it's a terrific start, BUT ....... why so short???? Great beginning tho

Comment by Alannah on 06/21/07
Sending in such a truncated chapter is a huge waste of time for all concerned. Why not just send in the whole story in one fell swoop?



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