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The Test
by Jojo Bruno

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Comment by see pron on 12/20/18
qO7tLE long time now and finally got the courage to go ahead and give you a shout out

Comment by Janice Elizabeth on 04/17/09
A very interesting story, but, in common with other reviewers, I feel that either the ending is missing or there is more to this story to be told.
Please say you'll continue this, I'm sure there is so much more to come.
Love and cuddles,
Janice Elizabeth

Comment by Job on 09/26/04
Good story, I enjoyed reading it.  Thanks..

Comment by Diane Sutton on 07/20/02
The story is done well with but a few mistakes sprinkled here and there but I found it worth the effort. It came out very well until the ending and that kind of left me with the feeling that it was just not finished.

I'd love to read something to give it more of a findal outcome.

Diane

Comment by Francesca Barrie on 05/04/01
A very readable story,sensitively written, nice short story length. I enjoyed it , thank you.

Comment by Jamie Nelson on 01/27/01
THE TEST is a great,believeable story of CD activities. Will there be a second chapter?? Hope so.    Dawn is also a fun story. Jamie

Comment by Jeremy on 01/21/01
   Cool idea.

   Maybe he gets really into crossdressing,but later comes to the conclusion that he prefer being a guy.He and that boy try to come to terms with being in a gay relationship.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/21/01
simply a lovely tale well worth reading.



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