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T-Girl Perfume
by Ellie Dauber

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Comment by Aleesha on 11/01/10
A bit short but not bad. I would love to buy that T-Girl perfune though.

Comment by gj on 06/15/10
short and quick.but i agree -with another,the victem rembering his old self whould be better.then tringtoo explain it too his girl freind.Or maybe a dark faith bestowes him,becomes asain like the clerk,but with no iddeported,and forced into under ground service.Moma was very vengful.

Comment by Brett on 12/29/02
I hope the GF is bi!

Blessings,

Brett

Comment by Paula on 11/03/02
Nice story though I prefer the character remmembering his old life.



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