You know, I'm getting the feeling that you, just don't like men. Call it a hunch.

I'm beginning to get the impression that you do little, if any research for your stories.

The graduate student would be thrown out of the psychology department for unethical behavior rather than given an A+.

If she was staying over at his apartment she obviously was having sex with him. Having sex with your study's subject is frowned upon.

She committed at least one felony in making the extra key without his permission. Why didn't she simply ask for a spare key?

She seemed to like the guy, what sort of cruel person continues down her path after deciding that she likes him? I'm not saying people like her don't exist, but your reasons for her doing this (a grade) doesn't wash.

For more reality you should have told us the name of the cross-dressing video.

Why would a college student have a camera with film? Wouldn't a grad student more than likely have a digital camera?

The use of the word "now" in past tense is jarring. It is acceptable, but should seldom be done.

When did he tell her he hated lesbians?  I thought he only hated cross-dressers.

You rush this story way too much. You didn't provide setting. Your characters were flat. The protagonist was not at all likeable.

I agreed with her theory and am certain had you done some research you could have made this much more interesting.

Also --- it seemed extremely strange that she would walk away from him so freely at the end. You didn't prepare us for that.

Jill

A case of self-fulfilling prophecies.

No A+ here.  Faye Baylor should be sent down.

Hi Jen!

Honey you get A+ on this story, too. Once again you have really written a perfectly delightful tale with a wonderful twist at the end. This was really charming and a pleasure to read.

Cassandra