FpZtRg Thanks a lot for the article post. Really Great.

YKPADn Awesome article post.Much thanks again. Keep writing.

just recently found your page (the red dress started it )
please continiue with bethany's story
this can be a amazing story

ps please continue
debbie

Hi Bethany,
      Have just read your wonderful story and throughly enjoyed it.
Ben/Bethany has a wonderful landlord and landlady and some interesting adventures. Please continue to bring us some more chapters.

Luv Rose.

Bethany, you are the best writer I have come across (pardon the pun). Your writing style is very good and easy to read. Please write more chapters in this story. Pleeeeese!!!!!

I die a thirsty death--MORE!!!!! (9 was not enuff!)

really good story don,take to long for the finale

 What a fantastic series - I must admit to having just found your pages, but better late than never.
  But no, dont add to it, (you probably didn't intend to at this late stage  but with a mini cliff hanger for each part, that last one was a lu lu, though perhaps if she'd said "Hello, mother," it might have been better still..   Brilliant stuff, I will read all the others now.

Donna.

YES!!!!! Bethany, PLEASE finish this story!!!!!!!!!!!
Hugs, Fran

AAARRRGGHHHH

one of the truly great stories, and it ends  at the big revealing moment

please oh please oh please finish the next part

I really loved this story, when are you going to continue with it?

Keep up the good writing.

The Horseman

The baggies beat the blues yesterday, so two celebrations what with coming home early and finding 2 things to read from my favourite author.

Just read 'red dress' episode 9 - loved the ending - 'hello mother'  
just wonderful!

Makes life worth living.

Tina

I like your stories very good

Please keep the stories coming.

can not wait for the next installment, or any new stories.

Just finished the latest chapter and I'm on the edge of my seat wanting more.  You have a wonderful writing style that makes reading your stories so enjoyable.  When can we expect the next chapter?  Please make it soon.

Can't wait for the next installment. I wish I lived in Brum

The way you leave your readers hanging and wanting more is exquisite.  Thank you for sharing your considerable talent with us.

Just finished no.8, whew, Bethany you sure do warm things up nicely.  Well written love scenes, extremely well written.  More, please, Joanna

Heh Come on my favourite author; time for another episode!
Nice as it is to read the same section twice, there must
be more to 'come'!

As a matter of interest, if you have time with your writing
-is all your work on this site?
- what is your favourite story?
and I wonder who is your favourite other author

Anyway keep up the good work

Tina

Bethany, I have loved your style; and really enjoyed your stories.... and yes, you are driving me crazy.... You keep adding a new version to your last one.... and then leave me hanging... lol.... luv it!!!!!  Keep them coming...!!        

Can't wait for more....soon i hope

what a way to leave us wanting more.

Well I thought this story was hot hot hot and I can't wait for the next installment;  and why not in dear old brum (up the baggies!) there's plenty of excitement there

Eagerly awaiting the next episode of That red dress. A supberb story that I wish it was me.  

I WILL BE WAITING FOR MORE

I really hate this story.  Those cliff hanger endings are absolute murder.  Especially when we aren't sure just how long we have to wait before 'with one bound our hero(ine) is free'.  Really, Bethany, don't keep us in suspense for too long.    And is it really all happening in Brum, of all places?  Great stuff, more please.

Geoff

I love tension from the danger of discovery that is present on his trips out of the safety of his flat. Good story keep going!

Amanda