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That's Not What I Meant
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Comment by Silvia. on 05/13/12
If it was in my country Gwen would be dead meat. Comment by boc on 11/21/08 wonderful story.you kept the excitement building until the wonderful climax. Comment by alicia on 07/28/07 a sweet and erotic story.i would luv to be todd's gurl! Comment by SandraB on 07/16/07 Thank you girls for the kind comments! Comment by Vickie on 07/15/07 What can I say? Wish I'd written that! The wife watching her husband being a woman with a man should have its effect on her too -- if as a woman he's afterward more turned on by men, she can be less turned on by him as a man but more by the voyeurism, by watching her "girl" and the guy get it on. What she then does? Well, that too is part of the imaginative play your excellent story has stimulated!. Comment by BB on 06/07/07 I loved it. Very erotic. Just what I come to this site to read. Thank you! Comment by alison on 06/01/07 What a wonderful story, i really felt like it was happening and could feel the heat as the story progressed, just wish it would have been me instead of him, continue the good work honey, alison |
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