uoQWjN Perfect  piece of work you have done, this website  is really cool with  fantastic  info.

jIs2FL Im grateful for the article post.Thanks Again. Really Great.

this is the best story i have read so far and i have read many, sometimes real life can beat out fantasy so much and i am sure you are giving hope to many. i many times thaught the same as you when i was younger and i hope things work out for you. they did not for me. it is way past hope for me , i am very much older now and no chance of me ever having the opertunity to go the route you have gone. i am not a story writer of any kind. I would be very happy if you could write the second part to this story and maybe i could live out my dream in you. feel free to email me , i would forever be in your debt. this is the first " and probably the last " time i have ever posted something like this but your story resounded in me so much that i could not help but post and hope for a reply. thank you for your time.

3wluej Thanks-a-mundo for the article.Really thank you! Awesome.

    I really loved your story. It was very well written and I really look forward to a part 2.

I really loved your story. It was very well written and I really look forward to a part 2.

Sad story.I'm really sorry.
Silvia.

Good story, well written, can't wait for part two,..

Really good story please continue it soon I would love to read more about it.

great story  please can you continue this story it seems a long time before it gets done i would like to read what happens next

Thats an amzing story can u please please finish it. Ive always felt the same and i myself have no testes due to a serious accident

Please, Please, Please finsh this story.

when are you going to finsh this story you can live us hanging on thin air like this wot happined next

wonderful story love IT!! very origanial

You simply have to finish this.I used to have daydreams similar to this,I think all TS's do.Love it so far.

Oh   you have got to finish this ......don,t wast tallent like this
and stop.....
         thank you for a glimce of what you can do ...
               Rone

this is a story of great interest and could well be improved along the way

Ouch!

Hey I live just down the road from yur story!
(A little South of Beenleigh)

Hope your life picked up in reality and that you became the person you wanted - sounds like the bus crash that happened on Henry Roberts Drive a while back! Bloody road was far too steep!

Great story - I had my Op in Pindara! about 10 mins from Southport Hospital!

Jenny

This story is bloody brilliant indeed! Well done so far.
I like how you describe the Gold Coast and how you bring up the Jehovah's Witnesses.  There's a lot of material there for you to work with.
The first question, obviously, is can she get reassigned without getting disfellowshipped and what are the consequences if she does?
I am well aware of the problems that ex JWs face. I actually know an ex JW who lived on Mt. Tambourine in the area you seem to be describing, and others in Shailer Park and Mansfield.
I also know an ex JW in Melbourne who left the church and lived with a bunch of other ex JW "witness punks" (his term). I know how hard the JWs can be on young people in general, let alone TS young people.  Keep up the good work.

Man this seem it would be short maybe it seems longer due to the size of the paragraphs but it was really a good start to a very good story I know that it takes almost forever to get things posted here but I do look forward to the next part and hope to see it soon.

I hope she finds that her friends are there for her. Maybe even get's her mother to understand but I doubt that will happen. I don't think she'll ever be close to her daddy.Though I think he may blame himself for what's happened to her.Please bring use more about her trave to womanhood.

Hi Allison,
          the first few paragraph's had so much information in them that I felt them to be hurried. I don't know much about growing up down under and find that a fresh new thing to imagine. I hope you take your time descibing the cultural differences that many will not be familiar with.
Very interesting first part, I look forward to the next.
Thankyou, Christine.

VERY NICE STORY AND WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK YOU HAVE A GREAT WAY OF PUTTING DOWN THE WORDS AND THAY FLOW TOGHER PLEASE WRITE MORE OFFTEN

                                     HUGGIES AND KISSIES
                                        JILLATEEN

Bloody brilliant!

I agree with the first comment about this story its well worth continuing and i would love to read how this turns out its very difficult if you are different to your mother in religeous terms i feel he should have been able to make up his own mind without having to resort to damaging himself to get what he wants well written next part please

Quite a start.  Looking forward to seeing how this turns out.