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Then She Made Four 3
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by solon on 06/01/03
The last comment must be ingenuous, cuz I thought this lil gem was a....semi precious stone or ruby or, say a gem!

Comment by Mina on 05/27/03
Awful. Simply awful.  And it never gives up and never gets any better.  No point in making the quantity over quality argument again.  It's a waste of time.

Comment by leah on 05/27/03
I'm pretty sure that any remark of mine to the effect that there is little depth here will be met with the response that you cannot go into great detail in a very short story. I can buy that, but the lack of adequate proofreading (spelling, verb tense, sense of action) is doubly deadly in such a brief piece.

That said, I'll be back to read more by this proven author.

     leah



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