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There's Going To Be A Hanging Tonight
by Rebecca Carnforth Taylor

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Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
EAKTeI Im grateful for the article.Really thank you!

Comment by Silvia. on 09/19/11
BAD!

Comment by Susan on 04/07/11
Lovely story, very erotic. I'm sure most of us girls would love to be the main character, if only it could be me. Keep up the excellent work.

Comment by eric grant on 07/22/10
i would love to try that

Comment by Artemis on 05/14/10
A small point.  A small - and very frequent - error, namely that the past participle of the verb hang when used to refer to an execution, is hanged.  And not hung.

Comment by GwendolineTV on 07/31/07
Great story, i'd love to be Rebbeca for a day.

Comment by AnaLyn on 07/06/07
A really nice, sweet story... very erotic

Comment by Ms. Susan Pauline Bauer on 08/12/05
Wow!

What a story. It had me very excited. You put into the written word, what I've only had thoughts about. Only for me, I was put into my French Maid's Uniform. I, "loved," this story. I do hope that you will write more of them. As Julia Roberts said in, "Pretty Woman," when she was at the opera, "I almost peed in my panties." I almost did while reading this.

Sisterly yours,

Ms. Susan

Comment by michelle on 11/18/03
Great story .love to be hanged in such a way  

Comment by shy surfer on 10/26/03
Be safe, thanks for sharing.

Comment by Gail on 10/15/03
I think it is a lovely story, hope you keep writing looking forward to your next story. all the best Gail

Comment by Ami Lamida on 05/12/03
A good, erotic start for this new author.  Thank you for being yourself.  Too many authors try to cater to the masses here, and their stories suffer because of it.  One thing I would suggest, is taking advantage of the volunteer authors here (look under author's corner).

I would agree that there is potential danger with this fantasy, and I think medical professionals should be present and vital signs monitored if this were really to take place.  It wouldn't have to detract from the fantasy, since there is often a doctor present at actual hangings to verify that the subject is dead (in this case, still alive).

However, I don't think a carefully planned overnight suspension would cause sufficient loss of circulation to cause suffocation.  It would take somewhat longer for a healthy person to succumb.  Environment can be an important factor though - especially when the subject is hooded and gagged.

I hope you will continue writing out your fantasies (surely you have more!).  You might want to check out my Bondage Tips & Safety page on my website for some more ideas.  It details what I've learned about suspension bondage from my own personal experience.

-Ami

http://www.geocities.com/amilamida

Comment by Ron on 05/12/03
Good story detailed. Please do not actually try this though. Many years ago I did an emergency medical course and one of the scenes was a sky diver who got caught in a tree. We had to get him out because the experts told us that if you are suspended without your feet touching you eventually have trouble breathing and can suffocate under your own weight. So please keep it a fantasy.

Comment by jynger kynh on 05/11/03
Very nice precisely detailed story.

An Unusual fantasy but it's nice to read one that the author is totally into.

I like that you presented it as a safe real acting out of a fantasy rather than as the fictional counterpart the fantasy was meant to represent. It made the scene much more good hearted.

I enjoyed the unusualness of the point of view.

Was the gaff predesigned to set you free at a given moment? That was the only detail I cared about that wasn't made explicitly clear.

This was a good reading story. I don't know if you have more fantasies to write about or if this was your only favorite. If you write more you have atleast one avid reader.

Spice and dreams - Jynger


Comment by Sharon on 05/10/03
A rather weird fantasy but enjoyable to read. Other than a few minor glitches in the words it was a good story.
not sure if I would want to go through that though. :o)
I wonder what it would be like if the bride was ignorant of the use of the corset harness and thought she was really to be hung? What would her emotions be then?
curious...............



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