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This Time
by Ilean Anne Jerque

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Comment by Rone  Welles on 04/22/10
 Its been a long time .. this story is timeless well written and shows the talent of the author ...
thank you for your skill and talent ... Rone Welles

Comment by Languish on 06/18/04
I applaud your skills as an author, as I am usualy disappointed by some people's work I have had the misfortune of reading.  I would also like to applaud your description of the gore during the attempted murder scene.  It was a great read and I am sincerly hoping to read other great stories by you.

Comment by Pervette on 07/15/03
A real surprise here: a fun prank, a nice CD story...& then a nasty
twist toward the end that made the story as a whole pretty grim.
Well done, however.  Just one minor cavil: the official in a school
is the principAL, not the principLE. When I was in high school,
they told us that a principLE was a ruLE, while the princiPAL was
your (get this!) PAL.  (Well, ours wasn't too bad, actually.)
.
--Pervy

Comment by Another Brian on 07/15/03
Well, You Really Did It "This Time"! Thank you for a good read. It is a definite Keeper. The story held my attention and provided me with interesting characters; although three characters with alcoholic problems seems a triffle frequent, even for Texas. Your skills with "This Time", have caused me to look up more of your previous work and give it a read. I couldn't ask for more.
Thank you, Another Brian.

Comment by Amanda on 07/13/03
 I thank you for this story!!!!  I only ask why the scene of injury had to be so brutal?  I enjoyed ever part of the storyline but was slightly disturbed by it's graphic nature..  I again thank you and hope to read more beautiful stories such as this

Comment by Francine  "Fran" on 07/13/03
I enjoyed your story. I smiled and had some water in my eyes.
hugs, Fran



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