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Comment by thisisme on 02/18/14
I liked the story. I actually liked jezzies expected end to the story better but yours is quite adequate. It is VERY hard to find someone that is so submissive they would surrender everything without complaint yet in this gendre it is suggested that you can't throw a dead cat without hitting one. Comment by Dottie on 05/01/13 I Love this story, Love the ending, two people in Love, Please keep writing these kind of stories, Comment by Jorge on 01/05/13 I thought the same thing about frenh kssiing.. Bout how gross it wuld b for their tongue to be in MY mouth.. But i LOVE french kssiing!! Its not tht bad.. And i like tht it happened with my current bf.. Who im gna marry.. Lol.. But its not bad.. Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 10/24/09 Sorry again, but I didn't like your story! Comment by mike on 06/03/09 a wonderful and loving story.thomas was so lucky to have a wife that brought out his feminine side.because they love each other things worked out so well. Comment by juliej on 12/17/07 a good story of manipulation Comment by Bobbie on 01/18/07 Another of your wonderful stories. Comment by suna on 02/10/06 A great story, I was pleased that the wife didn't lapse into witch-hood at the end when he made his stand. Comment by julie j on 09/12/04 your storys are very good no sign of violence or enforcement yet i really enjoy your writing its all wel written and great to read oh thwe feminne whiles take such a short time to plant in the head Comment by Sally Ann Francis on 03/29/04 You have very good storys. I hope you will keep them coming. Loving dom. is one of my favorites. Thank you, Sally. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/24/04 Actually, what I thought was going to happen when I read "twist at the end" was that as a woman "her" domme side would come out and she would take over the company reducing her wife to office girl. Your ending was much better than my nasty one :-) Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/24/04 FINALLY!!! A man who likes his feminine side but says "NO" when his wife pushes to hard. BRAVO. Comment by sheryl s. on 03/24/04 Actually, Axanar pretty much said it all for me, but since I came here to tell you how very much I enjoyed it, and how rich I felt your storytelling technique is, I might as well go ahead and finish the job. Comment by Axanar on 03/23/04 Margaret--where have you been? I don't know and it really doesn't matter but this is a great femdom story and I loved the twist at the end. You don't see it coming and it was VERY ingenious. |
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