both your stories are so lovely, I just love the time you have taken to describe the girls clothing which is what good stories are all about, so thank you and happy writing

Hi Andy.
Very good story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Wish it was me

Very pretty story about two lovely people finding each other.  It's one of my favorites!

Huggers!
Geena

Oh how I love this story > Probably because it comes so close to what I would love to have ..a very lovingrelationship with another transgendered lady .

Just when it seemed all stories were the same,your's came into view.It was the best. Thankyou

I loved the story and was delighted at the way the story progressed to a happy ending. I'm sure there could be more. ??

Really enjoyed the story, it seemed a lovely progression that I am sure all readers would wish for them to have happen to them. I certainly would. Looking forward to future stories from you.
Evon

Excellent story, nicely presented and very read worthy. Thanks for such a nice piece of work.

Simply one of the best stories I've read in many years.

I look forward to reading more of your work

Best Wishes Dianna

I enjoyed the slow changes made by both men, drawing each other slowly to be more and less than what they were apart.

You have an innate talent for story telling. The build up and character presentation.  Michelle was already where she wanted to be, Steve was lost in his own quagmire.  A simple meeting set the wheels in motion.  Michelle saw the real Steve and she brought it out.  I for one would enjoy the relationship they built.  The two of them loved each other for whom each was, you do not see that as much in relationships today. A well written story with a very true fairy tail ending.
I enjoyed it and with my imagination I saw the story. I was kept warm and fuzzy. Tank you

A great story and well worth reading. Please keep up the good work and give us smashing reading which is comfortable in itself.

Very sweet.  I liked the ending.  I have always thought that if I decided to live as a woman 24/7 I would hate having the reminder of a previous life dangling between my legs; eventually it would have to be one way or the other, no inbetween.

Great first posting. You took your time to build the story, making it so much more interesting to read.

luv

Paula

This is a very well written story and develops the two main characters beautifully.  The situation is not one that appeals to me at all, either in RL or fantasy, but the treatment won me over completely.

There are a few typos, and a naming error so some stricter proofing would improve the presentation, but they are few and hardly affect the enjoyment at all.

thanks

Geoff

Lovely, lovely story line! I loved the slow build up to the love making and wish it were me! Please continue as their relationship develops!  Love & kisses  Carolyn Renee

Awesome

Really nice story -- the characterization of the narrator was excellently done.  (Not sure about the final sentence, though; didn't seem to me that Steve would want to go quite that far.)

Seemed somewhat explicit for the R rating, though.

Eric