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Threesome
by Little Tom

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Comment by excited reader on 04/03/07
Threesome is your best story yet.

I do hope you keep writing.  I wonder how many changes the hero had?  This story deserves another chapter, I hope.

What did he look like?  How much else was the same as his magic clothes gave him?

Was his manhood still under the command of his wife?  If so, how much else did she have command of?

Was he still able to feel the sexual feelings of his wife?

Never mind those nurds who complain about your creative spelling.

Creative Spelling = Ctreative thinking...


Comment by donna on 05/17/06
VERY  different story.

I liked it a lot but wonder what changes this porr guy had.

Keep writing!!!



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