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Tickles and Treats
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Comment by crorkz on 08/03/14
Pi0gR5 Thank you for your article.Much thanks again. Comment by take a look at it! on 10/24/13 FsnRGr wow, awesome article.Much thanks again. Really Great. Comment by Rone Welles on 06/06/13 Nicely written fun and interesting hope the future holds much for you thank you ... rone wells Comment by Silvia. on 06/28/10 No comments! Comment by JB on 04/19/09 My curiosity is up about how you and Jane managed 8 or 10 years later. Surely you’ve had time to reconnect and become friends again. Do let us know if you communicate with each other now that you can look back with more mature eyes and what I would suspect as a deep friendship of youth matured to a genuine adult friendship. Comment by Molly on 06/27/08 The author tells us in her summary that this is a true story from her life. This bit, near the end of the last part, is neither sweet nor sentimental: Comment by Gary on 04/16/06 What a great story! I remember similar situatios growing up..there were always packages of clothing. I remember picking on several occasions a silky nightgown. I wore it around the house with my sisters... Comment by Gary on 04/16/06 What a great story! I remember similar situatios growing up..there were always packages of clothing. I remember picking on several occasions a silky nightgown. I wore it around the house with my sisters... Comment by julie j on 02/28/05 an intresting story of the good old days well written &explained Comment by Briar on 02/06/05 Lovely story - you really captured (?recalled?) the innocence of small children in this account, and this is what made it so charming. Comment by Annie O on 02/17/04 What a great story! Congratulations. It's too bad cousins can't marry -- they'd most likely make a fine couple! Comment by jennifer on 01/30/04 Lovely story so far Angela, really nice. Can't wait to see what happens next. I particularly would like to see him wearing that oh so typical little girl's rubberised mackintoshes that were so popular years ago. I've visited the areas you describe many times, so I can identify easily. You may like to have a look at some of my stories on 'Storysite'. Thanks for the pleasure. Comment by Angel O'Hare on 01/29/04 Another very entertaining chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Comment by Julie LaRue on 01/29/04 very fun and interesting story. not being from UK the places mentioned are unknown to me but are very integral to the story and i can imagine what it's like there. and the red velvet dress part was exciting to read about, especially when jane became involved in it. the tickles and treats part was inspirational if it was real, (which i hope it was). it makes me wonder if it is your life as a youngster keep up the great work. Comment by Rhonda on 12/31/03 A delightful tale. I did enjoy it very much and hope you continue to add your experiences to it. Comment by Leanne on 12/29/03 I just read both of your wonderful stories. Is any of this based on fact? Keep up the good work! Comment by leah on 12/28/03 Well, Angela Jane, your second chapter is as cute and believable as the first one was. Generally, I'm not mad about serials, but your two little stand-practically-alone vignettes each work well. Comment by Samantha Michelle Davies on 12/28/03 A good Start indeed. For those who don't know, ITMA was a top BBC radio show that predates the Goons. ITMA = Its That Man Again. I can just about remember it. Yes, I am old enough to have my post war ration book. Comment by Jimmy on 12/28/03 Just one question. If his cousin is named Jane, why does Mike refer to her as H? Comment by Julie LaRue on 12/11/03 oh i do hope you continue with this tale,(i presume it is your life) Comment by vanityfair on 12/08/03 nice story, please continue. i wish i had started wearing panties and such this way. Comment by mikie on 12/08/03 This story is so enjoyable. I do agree with Stephanie's comments concerning the lad's resistance. Please continue the story. Comment by Jennifer on 12/08/03 Very nice beginning Angela. Gentle and sweet, and the story shows promise. Please hurry up with the next instalment. Comment by Julie on 12/05/03 A very sweet, nicely related story. Good Job! I hope to see just a little more detail in the sequel. Comment by Stephanie on 12/05/03 Very sweet beginning. I like that fact that Mike really wants to wear his cousins clothes but feels compelled to protest.Please continue and please don't be to long before you post the next installment (It's just a red velvet dress).I found the story line to be an interesting twist to a rather common story. Since Jane is a bit of a tomboy, maybe the two of them could swap lives for , at least a little while. Keep it sweet and sentimental ( there's not enough of that). The story is well paced. Keep up the wonderful writing. Comment by Carolyn Renee on 12/05/03 Very nice start Angela. Please continue. This has always been a fantasy of mine! Love & Kisses Carolyn Renee Comment by Carolyn Renee on 12/05/03 Very nice start Angela. Please continue. This has always been a fantasy of mine! Love & Kisses Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 12/05/03 Delicious. Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 12/05/03 Dear Angela: Comment by Pervette on 12/04/03 An enchanting beginning, with just enough different make it a Comment by leah on 12/04/03 Not only will I be looking forward to your next instalment (The Boy in the Red Velvet Dress??), but your game "Tickles and Treats" is bound to keep kindred imaginations around the globe busy for some time to come. |
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