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Tickles and Treats
by Angela Jane Muncey

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Comment by crorkz on 08/03/14
Pi0gR5 Thank you for your article.Much thanks again.

Comment by take a look at it! on 10/24/13
FsnRGr wow, awesome article.Much thanks again. Really Great.

Comment by Rone Welles on 06/06/13
Nicely written  fun and interesting hope the future holds much for you   thank you  ... rone wells

Comment by Silvia. on 06/28/10
No comments!

Comment by JB on 04/19/09
My curiosity is up about how you and Jane managed 8 or 10 years later. Surely you’ve had time to reconnect and become friends again. Do let us know if you communicate with each other now that you can look back with more mature eyes and what I would suspect as a deep friendship of youth matured to a genuine adult friendship.

The story setting I think would put your current age in 2010 at between 75 and 80, estimating your year of birth to be near 1935 or slightly after.

I did rather enjoy your stories.

JB


Comment by Molly on 06/27/08
The author tells us in her summary that this is a true story from her life. This bit, near the end of the last part, is neither sweet nor sentimental:

>>One morning Jane came early into my room and woke me up with a tickle. I was in my jamas that night but as she pulled the bedclothes back to get at me my trouser fly gaped open and she stared at my willy. To my embarrassment it was a little bit stiff as I needed a pee and recently I suppose hormones had been kicking in. She was fascinated by my little willy. She wanted to play with it and tried to. She was a good deal stronger than me, I suppose it was all that horse riding; she sat on my chest facing my feet and tickled my willy as I struggled to get her off. Then it happened for the first time. I felt a strong sensation and thought I was going to wet the bed when out spurted a little of my first ever orgasm. She jumped back with a look of horror on her face and rushed back to her room. I was so embarrassed. I used my hanky to wipe up the spill and went to bathroom to pee.

>>There was a strained silence between us at breakfast. Mum wanted to know why we had quarrelled. We said we hadn't. Afterwards we went into the garden together and I started to say sorry. She said it didn't matter and that she knew all about that sort of thing from school lessons. I was intrigued because I didn't know anything about it and was worried that I was sick or something. Bless her, she saw I was about to cry so she gave me hug and sat with me and told me all that she had learned at school about it. I did feel a lot better then and she promised she wouldn't do that again.

>>But she did. And this time we were caught by Aunty who told Mum who told Dad and I was deeply in the dog box as was Jane. And when Aunty and Uncle arrived a few days later they heard too. There was such a row over it. Uncle was furious that Mum had allowed us to get into such a situation and Aunty Nel just cried about her poor innocent little girl.

Such sexual exploration is natural. What angers me is how "poor, innocent" Jane (who is neither poor nor innocent -- she is a healthy, ordinary HUMAN girl with a natural curiosity) instigates this play, and our narrator is held to account SIMPLY BECAUSE HE IS A BOY. Elsewhere in this narrative, we see that it is okay for Jane to express her masculine energy as a "tomboy," while our narrator is branded a "sissy" and a "fag" for doing the reverse. With such misandrist bigotry in our wretched culture, it is no wonder that we "female wannabes" (distinct from TS) are a "dime a dozen," while the girls who want to be boys are much scarcer.


Comment by Gary on 04/16/06
What a great story! I remember similar situatios growing up..there were always packages of clothing.  I remember picking on several occasions a silky nightgown.  I wore it around the house with my sisters...

I suppose we all have some memories of how we started. Your story brought back so many...thanks!

Gary

Comment by Gary on 04/16/06
What a great story! I remember similar situatios growing up..there were always packages of clothing.  I remember picking on several occasions a silky nightgown.  I wore it around the house with my sisters...

I suppose we all have some memories of how we started. Your story brought back so many...thanks!

Comment by julie j on 02/28/05
an intresting story of the good old days well written &explained

Comment by Briar on 02/06/05
Lovely story - you really captured (?recalled?) the innocence of small children in this account, and this is what made it so charming.

For Annie O's information, at least in the UK it is NOT illegal for cousins to marry!        

Comment by Annie O on 02/17/04
What a great story! Congratulations. It's too bad cousins can't marry -- they'd most likely make a fine couple!
 Jennifer, when you going to write another story?

Comment by jennifer on 01/30/04
Lovely story so far Angela, really nice. Can't wait to see what happens next. I particularly would like to see him wearing that oh so typical little girl's rubberised mackintoshes that were so popular years ago. I've visited the areas you describe many times, so I can identify easily. You may like to have a look at some of my stories on 'Storysite'. Thanks for the pleasure.

Hugs from Jennifer.

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 01/29/04
Another very entertaining chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
Huggles
Angel

Comment by Julie LaRue on 01/29/04
very fun and interesting story. not being from UK the places mentioned are unknown to me but are very integral to the story and i can imagine what it's like there.  and the red velvet dress part was exciting to read about, especially when jane became involved in it.  the tickles and treats part was inspirational if it was real, (which i hope it was).  it makes me wonder if it is your life as a youngster keep up the great work.

hugs
julie

ps if you e-mail me be sure to put tickles n treats in the title

Comment by Rhonda on 12/31/03
 A delightful tale.  I did enjoy it very much and hope you continue to add your experiences to it.

Comment by Leanne on 12/29/03
   I just read both of your wonderful stories. Is any of this based on fact? Keep up the good work!

Comment by leah on 12/28/03
Well, Angela Jane, your second chapter is as cute and believable as the first one was. Generally, I'm not mad about serials, but your two little stand-practically-alone vignettes each work well.

No T & T this time, but you've intimated further adventures, so we will keep our hopes alive that cousin Jane (or H?) returns to help Michael on with whatever process is in motion here. --- Nice also, that you've brought little sister as well as Dad somewhat into the goings on. --- And it was good to see that Mike is having a chance to expand his wardrobe. --- Wonder how long we'll have to bide until someone chooses a feminine name for our young protagonist.

I'm willing to wager that 5-10 times as many appreciative readers have found the Tickle and Tease stories by now as have found the time to write, so the fan club is growing.

Comment by Samantha Michelle Davies on 12/28/03
A good Start indeed. For those who don't know, ITMA was a top BBC radio show that predates the Goons. ITMA = Its That Man Again. I can just about remember it. Yes, I am old enough to have my post war ration book.
Please don't skimp on the detail of you situation. It helps to paint the picture. I too started wearing panties etc at about your age in this story. If it is autobiograpical, then why didn't you take the trolley bus into Bromley as I did when I stayed at my Aunts?
Keep up the good work.
Samantha.

Comment by Jimmy on 12/28/03
Just one question.  If his cousin is named Jane, why does Mike refer to her as H?

Comment by Julie LaRue on 12/11/03
oh i do hope you continue with this tale,(i presume it is your life)
it is cute anf the T&T part of it sounds fasinating. i didn't find any glaring errors so the story went smoothly.

hugs n kisses
julie

Comment by vanityfair on 12/08/03
nice story, please continue. i wish i had started wearing panties and such this way.

Comment by mikie on 12/08/03
This story is so enjoyable.  I do agree with Stephanie's comments concerning the lad's resistance.  Please continue the story.

Comment by Jennifer on 12/08/03
Very nice beginning Angela. Gentle and sweet, and the story shows promise. Please hurry up with the next instalment.

Comment by Julie on 12/05/03
 A very sweet, nicely related story.  Good Job!  I hope to see just a little more detail in the sequel.  
                               Hugs,
                               Julie

Comment by Stephanie on 12/05/03
Very sweet beginning. I like that fact that Mike really wants to wear his cousins clothes but feels compelled to protest.Please continue and please don't be to long before you post the next installment (It's just a red velvet dress).I found the story line to be an interesting twist to a rather common story. Since Jane is a bit of a tomboy, maybe the two of them could swap lives for , at least a little while. Keep it sweet and sentimental ( there's not enough of that). The story is well paced. Keep up the wonderful writing.

Stephanie

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 12/05/03
Very nice start Angela. Please continue. This has always been a fantasy of mine! Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 12/05/03
Very nice start Angela. Please continue. This has always been a fantasy of mine! Love & Kisses

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 12/05/03
Delicious.  
Do write more.
Cordially,
Mardee

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 12/05/03
Dear Angela:

   Very lovely and sweet. Is Mom psychic? She seems to know something here.  Keep it up it looks to be a lovely tale whether it is mostly true to life or not. I am wondering about a lot of things here, please don't keep us waiting too long.  Very crisp and almost driven style. Good mechanics, and no mistakes jumped out at me.  A truly fun, fresh and sweet tale.                                                                                                                                                                                                              Hugs,  

Kristi

Comment by Pervette on 12/04/03
An enchanting beginning, with just enough different make it a
new & original take on this well-worn theme. I'm eagerly awaiting
the next part.


--Pervy

Comment by leah on 12/04/03
Not only will I be looking forward to your next instalment (The Boy in the Red Velvet Dress??), but your game "Tickles and Treats" is bound to keep kindred imaginations around the globe busy for some time to come.



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