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Tiffany Manners - Assistant to the President
by Karen Anne Summerfield

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Comment by Zotyi on 10/23/12
These pictures are just too wofrudnel!  Of course, you couldn't have two better looking or more precious subjects (or three, including Mr. Hansel).  There's not a single bad picture in the whole bunch.  I think my favorites are the beach pictures, since that is where the engagement took place and where they will begin their new life together.  Cheers to the bride and groom and these beautiful shots!  Love.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 04/17/10
I still wanna know what happened to Marci.

Comment by Silvia. on 04/25/09
Good story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Michael on 05/21/08
A good plot. Well written,story gets you interested in the characters. I like stories dealing with air or salons.

Comment by Brian on 09/04/04
What a sweet story.  We've all heard this theme before, but for once the people were realistic, and the change was not an exercise in humiliation.  You should be proud.  BTW, what did happen to Marci?

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 05/31/04
From the title, I was expectging president of the USA.  What happened to bossy Marci ?Does she work for Tiffany now?

Comment by Anne Baker on 02/06/02
I liked this story. A credible plotline, well developed characters, good visual descriptions. The story played out well through to a good ending. Well done!

Comment by debbie cybill on 06/02/01
A delightful story that starts out with a familiar theme, better handled that most such efforts by other authors and moving through to an unexpected ending. I liked the twist in the tail.
Karen's writing continues to improve and her eponym is believable at every stage of transition from teen-aged boy to reluctant model.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 06/01/01
I liked the story as it moved quite nicely. This author has come a long way in her skills as a author and continues to show her talents as she continues to add to her catalog of stories.

I enjoyed how she gives her subject just the right amount of motavation to continue with his/her new idenity, even though the lead character is somewhat reluctent at first.

There was enough descriptive words to convey her transformation, even though the character did not follow the normal routine of feminization that I tend to expect. As a matter of fact there was no feminization of the character, just the making of what I consider a cross dresser who comes to take advantage of her new role as a pretty girl. The author has done a very fine job and I recommend her works. And I liked her ending as it was somewhat unexpected, but it works well in this story.

Comment by emmie dee on 06/01/01
An enjoyable fantasy about a reluctant Cinderella.

Comment by Nellie D on 05/31/01
A very common theme with a different outcome. Boy is conned into becoming girl for an event but wins a job modeling. The plot line and writing are well executed and the detail of the descriptions is fair. Overall it is a good story.



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