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by Marco-Tiffany

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Comment by Tiffany/ Marco on 07/10/07

Yeah sorry about the paragraphs thing, I wasnt very good at english at school, But my spellings exemplary Innit?

Comment by mirko sidoli on 06/13/07

i loved it ,i know it has no paragraphs but that added to the hypno quality .Yes a little glazed over but enjoyable and a good experience

Comment by Tiffany Anne Easton on 01/03/07

I can see the hypnosis factor involved, but for the reader, paragraphing is definitely a plus. Just hit the "enter" key twice, that simple.
I would recommend reformatting it and sending it off to Mz. Dominica, Warp My Mind, or one of the fine Dom women over at Sissy School and have them record an audio mp3 version.
Hugs!
Tiffany Anne

Comment by Beverly on 12/30/06

I am sure it is a nice story, at least it starts out that way. Unfortunately one can not concentrate on reading this giant lump of words and sentnces. Yes, this story needs to be worked over.

Comment by Cathy on 12/30/06

Ever heard of a paragraph?

Comment by Ashley on 12/30/06

I agree, it would be a much better story if I could read it without wanting burst into tears at the thought of the torture being inflicted upon me while trying to read it.
Please reformat this so people will stop and read it
Thank you =)
Ashley

Comment by tiffany on 12/29/06

boring...to much of listen to my voice

Comment by Leah on 12/29/06

No doubt I'll at least start this story, but I'm predisposed to hating it. My eyes tear up at the mere thought of trying to wade through this paragraphless miasma. (I guess I'll copy it into the word processer, then doublespace the whole thing.)
If there was a purpose in inflicting this difficult format upon your readers, m/t, you might have at least tried justifying your approach. That way we know you probably didn't perpetrate this out of sheer laziness or ineptitude. (And NO, I did not say creating paragraphs is easy, but it surely helps the reader. (And it helps the author develop self-discipline.))

Comment by A friend on 12/29/06

I'm sure it's wonderful, but it's unreadable. Am I the only one?

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