OK, Not bad!
Silvia.

Tight Money was a very enjoyable read.  This like other of your works shows a sensitivity that I often find lacking.  I find the empathy of yor characters and their positive attitudes refreshing.  I wonder if you've found the same thing in your own life.  I often wonder how much of the story an author writes is autobiographical and how much is wishful thinking.

Looking forward to more of your work

Wow  this story tells a lot ....the author is to be commended and praised ...  lessons and talent from magic fingers have blessed our eyes.. thank you for sharing with us wierdos ...

peace rone   xo

Nice story, even with the mandatory (and annoying, for me at least) scene about shopping. Your story showed me that isn't necessary hot stuff to keep me entertained (though I got a little thrilled) but I guess a bit of spice would have suited your tale fine. Not that I am complaining as I enjoyed your work as it was. As an aspiring writer (in Spanish, my native language) I am a bit critical of everything I read, even if it's as fictional as TG fiction can be. I mean, a lot of stories are the same. Boy dresses up, Mom knows better, a visit to a clothes store and so on till the reader reaches the same end she had read hundreds of times. You can use these topics, of course, but come on let's do it in a different way. I think your story has some refreshing approach, though I think it lacked of some more detail, especially  when the boys are putting girls' clothes on them and the feelings derived of it. I guess that's the core of a TG story. But that's just me. And I have been proved wrong a lot of times.

Anyway, these days I rarely read completely a story. I do read yours wholly. That speaks a lot. Thanks for that.

By the way, I hope to post some of my TG stories some day, that's why I permitted myself to criticize a little your work. Have a nice day.

This was a wonderful story Patricia. I thouroughly enjoyed the characters and the way you portraid them. Keep up the great work.

Stephie C.

Great story.....I agree with Pervy's comments.  Your theme is very plausible.  The best kind.  I look forward to reading more of your work.

This is a delightful story.  One boy is dressed...then another boy
is dressed....  I've seen this sometimes in stories by Emily Ross.
(Please don't think I'm questioning your originality!  Great minds
frequently hit on similar story ideas.)  But the way it's worked
out was what gave such pleasure.  And the general sense of innocent
fun throughout.  The problem, of course, is to explain why the
father acquiesced so readily; but you handled that, too, deftly &
completely credibly.  All in all, very well done.  (Lucky boys....)
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--Pervy

As always, Patricia tells a sweet and delightful story. Two painted thumbs up!