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Timeless Beauty
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/18/04
Ilove the three living together like to have seen more about that.But interesting story

Comment by Emmie on 08/18/04
I have to say I enjoyed the setup more than the payoff. The mannequin fantasy doesn't really connect with me, or with most readers, I suspect. On the other hand, the three young trannies living together, and under the watchful eye of the matron: that has real possibilities. How did they find each other? Does everyone on campus know about them, or does nobody know? And what about this matron? Is she one of them, or is it just her job? There are some real possibilities there to explore.



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