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Timing Is Everything
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Lorelei on 04/11/15
Just delightfully told, especially the step-by-step transformation of Randy and Monica into each other's genders, and their individual reactions as they realize they are morphing into what they really want to be, and can stay permanently as heterosexual lovers. May Nick always be macho, and happy panties and napkins to Catherine!
Comment by Chelsea on 02/08/08
I want to say thank you for this story. This story was so beautiful, I loved it very much, you did an excellent job of depicting an MtF AND a FtM, which is a real rarity. There is nothing wrong with being a boy, unless you aren't one same with being a girl. Everyone should be allowed to be who they are, regardless of their biology ^^
Comment by Lala on 09/04/07
Wow, Jennifer! You are the only author I read in this genre since transition. Your ability to write about the way this really feels really moves me.

I've sometimes wondered if you were one of us, a TS rather than a TV. If this story is how you feel, I can only tell you it's quite possible.

Again, wonderful!

lala

Comment by Paula Jutras on 09/01/07
a true heart felt story that was a pleasure to read.
Comment by Cooknclean on 08/29/07
Nice story and very sentimental.Lots of us have these dreams. Supprising ending. Good read!


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