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Tim's Dream
by Sarah Smith

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Comment by rita on 09/25/13
lovely story such an erotic longing please write more
Comment by Sharon on 05/18/11
A lovely story I loved my sister dressing me up, we had some lovely times as girls .
Comment by Aleesha on 02/25/10
I enjoyed your story but I wish you had of continued. I would have liked to have known whether Tim/Tina continued his transformations.
Comment by lillian on 05/16/04
wonderful story would like to read more
Comment by Angel O'Hare on 03/05/04
Perfect! I don't say that often! This was the right length, had the right content and flowed oh so well. Congatulations on creating such a wonderful short story.

Now if I could only write a short story...Giggle.

Huggles
Angel
Comment by Amanda on 03/02/04
A really nice story

Thank you
Comment by MARTY on 02/26/04
GREAT STORY .LOOKING FORWARD TO SOME REAL GIRLS NIGHT OUT ADVENTURES .PLEASE TRY TO CONVEY THE FEELING OF TINAS PEACE AND CONTENTMENT WHEN SHE IS OUT DRESSED WITH HER SISTER .FROM PERSONAL EXPERIENCE IT FEELS GREAT TO BE OUT DRESSED LIKE A REAL LADY .SINCERELY   MARTY
Comment by Tamara Rand on 02/26/04
What I especially liked about this little gem was Tim's honesty in telling his sis that he really *did* like wearing a dress. That, in turn, made it a lot more plausible that sis would propose a game that would be fun for *both* of them.  Nicely done.
.....Tamara.
Comment by Pervette on 02/26/04
This is a little gem.  Just the right combination of dream and
reality.  I wouldn't change a thing, if I were you, & I wouldn't
make it any longer.  You made your point.
.
--Terry Gal
Comment by Rose on 02/26/04
Great story and what a wonderful sister.
Please do continue with this story.
Comment by Jaclyn on 02/26/04
Every "Girls" Dream.  Big Sister Helping Little Brother,Become
Little Sister.
Please, And I say It Again P L E A S E, If You Continue, (And
You Really Need Another Chapter). Let Tina, Only Become Sexually
Invoved With Real Females.  So Tired Of The Guy / Girl Becomes
Some Sexual Toy For The Other Boy's / Men.
Many Of Us "Girls", Only Want To Be With Girls In All Ways.


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