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Tina and Caroline
by Caroline Bradley

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Comment by Silvia on 06/21/11
Good.

Comment by Aleesha on 01/24/10
Your story was different and original. I'm glad you finished with a good ending. Enjoyed very much, Thanks.

Comment by Tina on 12/02/03
Hi Caroline
Isn't it about time, you gave us another installment on this?

Love Tina xx

Comment by SandiAnne on 03/10/03
My Dearest,

Your story was absolutely magnificent. You have depicted a lovely transitional situation through a garcious filter of professional writing.

Please fulfill your avid readers by continuing this beautiful theme with many more installments.

Thank you for some very pleasant reading.

Comment by Josie on 01/30/03
Caroline, this made me feel warm and fuzzy all over.  I thought the dialogue was terrific, and your descriptives were sheer brilliance.  I can hardly wait for the next installment.

Hugs,
Josie

Comment by TinaTVuk on 01/28/03
I agree with the last review.  It is a really lovely story which flows along at quite a pace.  Caroline sounds lovely and if I was that Tina, I would really want to meet you for real.  Looking forward to the next installment!   Tina xx

Comment by Pervette on 01/24/03
Very pleasant story. I imagine lots of CDs would like their wives
to cooperate so agreeably. I did think that Julie's volte-face was
a bit abrupt, however. True, she had finally gotten the story of
the encounter untangled, but I think it would have required a bit
more adjustment, just the same. But this is a minor quibble; the
story was a good one, & I look forward to other stories with the
same pleasant atmosphere.
.
--Pervy



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