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Tina's Story
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by thewallis on 07/18/17
So glad it worked out for Jerry and the bitch got her comeuppance. Mind you if I had been Jerry she would have paid a bigger price. Women just cant cope with their faces being ruined.

Comment by Silvia. on 10/25/09
I didn't like the story, but at least the end wasn't so bad!
Silvia.

Comment by Dianna on 08/25/08
thus far my favourite of the stories you've written. The reason for it is because the wife simply didn't get away with it, and her husband didn't accept a 'band-aid' apology.

Comment by linzi lovsitt on 02/28/06
poor guy was a wimp but it makes a change when common sense appears in stories the first thing anyone with half a brain would do when presented with documents signing over property ect would challenge them

Comment by juliej on 09/17/04
this story is one of the best you have written its amazing how jerry got through this with the support of some freinds briliant story his wife went to far and got it all thrown back in his face a sequel to this story would be good to feel outhow things turned out in the end for both well done again your stories are brilliant

Comment by Early June on 07/23/04
You have written a good story.  The twist at the end was unexpected.
The characters took on a life and Carol seems to have received what she worked for.  I would hope the new couple live happily ever after.
I definitely will read more of your postings and look forward to enjoying them.

Comment by Jenny on 07/18/04
I like this one, too.  Not as much as the last, but I do like it.  Guess I'll have to bookmark Margaret's Author Page so I can keep track of what she writes.



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