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Tinkle
by A Happy Wife

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Comment by Silvia. on 04/19/10
Oh Yeah! Your stories are so bad, that everything  we can say is:
Bad,bad,bad,bad,bad,bad,bad,bad.......................etc......................................................................
Silvia.

Comment by Jayne N. on 10/09/07
This comes quite late but I hope you will continuemto write as your stories are terrific!!!!!!  Love, Jayne

Comment by Ms. Susan Pauline Bauer on 08/17/05
Dear Happy Wife, with a polite curtsey,

You'll get tired of my comments. This has to be either the fourth or fifth story of yours, that I've read. All are well done. These help keep my life in proper perspective. That bell idea of yours in great. You could probably start a business with that. Mealtime preparation is upon me and my new, Waitress Uniform awaits me. It, even has, "Ms. Susan," embroidered on it. I'm going to read more just before bed time.

Sisterly yours, with another curtsey,

Ms. Susan Pauline

Comment by juliej on 02/02/05
a short story &explanation very intresting his humilation is going a long way

Comment by Maria on 04/26/02
Well Teresa,
  Just email me and you shall be teased.  You will be given public humiliating assignments and you will be expected to email me pictures as proff of your obedience.  If you are ready for the time of your life email me NOW.

Comment by Teresa on 02/24/02
I would wear the humilation with style, would love to have you tease me

Comment by bootlicker on 10/21/01
just loved the story but why can't you make him lick your boots more and maybe he could pump himself against them in front of your friends and then lick the mess up.

Comment by sissy sammy on 10/18/01
I think that you are the best author on this site and I love how you humiliate your sissy in front of friends and family please keep up the good work
curtsey
sissy sammy

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 10/11/01
Well, yes, I wondered about the "sweet and sentimental," too.  But
while I like sweet and sentimental, I sometimes like a bit of the
nasty, too--in moderate quantities--and you can always be relied
on for that.  One of the ways a wife can be happy, after all...

Pervy

Comment by sissy cindy ann on 10/10/01
This sissy loved this & all of your stories! More, More More!!!!
I thought from the title initially that it would involve 2 Women feminizing their sissy's wee-wee - bathroom habits.  That was done to me some years back (haven't stood in years, it's not proper for a lady to do that).  

i eagerly await your next offering.  It was a rough summer without you.  

sissy cindy ann
PS- Don't worry about the previous poster, i'm sure your stories are amongst the most eagerly awaited here, they are for me.

Comment by Jill M on 10/09/01
Where is the sweet?  Where is the sentimental?  Where is the love?

Isn't there anything in this relationship that borders on caring for one another?

The characters need to be described more to bring this story to life.  We know nothing about where the characters are going, where they've been.

Usually I try to be more positive.  This story left me cold.  I know I shouldn't be so darn negative... but what was the point?

Maybe it was simply a genre I don't 'get'?



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