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To Everyone's Advantage
by Alamo Preacher

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Comment by jake jilennanal on 05/15/17
L3kjBo The time to read or go to the material or web-sites we have linked to beneath.

Comment by Ronald on 04/13/14
Kudos this is the best story on the site in my opinion.  

Comment by Ronald on 04/13/14
Kudos this was my favorite story and I have read most of them.  I hope you are still writing.

Comment by the best seo service on 09/06/13
4jy6tF Very good article post.Really looking forward to read more. Fantastic.

Comment by Alamo Preacher on 01/31/09
This story is continued at my site alamo-preacher.com

Comment by juliej on 10/01/08
good story great start

Comment by Marie Sands on 07/27/08
Great story I really enjoyed it, The wife just made her husband happy and at the same time she got herself something in return.

Comment by BoyToy on 02/20/08
Every man's dream is to play with women's panties, etc and be dominated by them. Most women dont understand that men want to let their guards down on occasion and be "taken" by a woman.

Comment by christine on 06/11/07
GREAT STORY WISH MY WIFE WOULD READ THIS AND FOLLOW THRU . LIKE OTHER READERS I TOO WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE FROM THIS WRITER .

Comment by juliej on 03/11/07
its an interesting story that could go further than it has the explanation of more things to come &hew qwould be a great addition to the story so far so good but write more for this story please

Comment by Vickey on 08/05/06
let me start by saying I enjoyed your story. I would very much like to read more on how you contuined to take your sissy further as I am looking to do the same to my sissy and I am reading stories to further my education. My sissy to be is now wearing my underware and I know he wants more but I do not know how to continue,as this is all new to me. Please continue this story so I will have more insite on how I may continue.  Thank you for your wonderful story

Comment by juliej on 07/15/06
having re read this story it need more to it and needs to be continued its a bit half harted at present with no set pattern to events just a small taste of it more please

Comment by julie j on 02/09/05
I liked this story but it is to short please condsider writing more on this story well done excelent

Comment by wweary on 12/14/04
I found this to be a very erotic story.  Not over-the-top as most erotic stories seem to be- more of a classic striptease than a slutty lap-dance.  From the reaction of others it has left the audience (including myself) hungry for more.  Now, don't be such a tease and give us just a little more...PLEASE!

Comment by ade on 10/04/03
this is one of the better stories on the site. i hope that there will be another installment as you really have a gift with writing about d/s in a loving relationship.

Comment by Susan Anne-Pauline on 03/03/03
This well written story captivated my complete attention. You put into words what many males in this nation only dream about. There are all kinds of love. Sex can be a example if it but not necessarily part of it. It was inportant that you wrote of the love that those two have and will continue to have. It merely manifests itself in different ways. No sequal is needed. The reader's imagination will do that for them. It's important for each person in a marrage to give to the other. It can't be one way all the time as Steve, in your story, had it.

Susan

Comment by Erica June on 02/10/03
I hope there will be a sequel, soon.  It seems a shame not to hear about his reactions the first time he has to wait on her lover, and serve their friends when she introduces the lover to them all.  And of course, once he has learned submission to her every demand, she should force him to submit to a man, as she records it all on videotape, to show at their next party.

Comment by Chastity Anne on 01/13/03
I too am very much in favor of a sequel as I hope that you can put a twist on a very common story theme and push the limits.  I truly loved the set up in this first part as you left the door open for so many possibilities.  As with comments I have made to other authors, I love stories where the man's fantasy gets pushed past any limits he may otherwise have had.  Instead of relying on his word not to pleasure himself without her permission, I'd love to have you have her chastise him and make sure that he only gets released if and when she has done everything she desires.  If he wants to be cuckholded - make sure that he stays that way as you completely emasculate him.  Please keep up the good start.

Comment by LG Heather on 01/10/03
Nice story has a great visual of whats going on. Sounds like this husband is in for some intresting times.

Comment by Pervette on 01/08/03
Funny...when people cry out for a sequel, I'm usually the one who says No, the story has closure & is complete as it stands. Well, this time, I'm changing my tune. The combination of feminization & continuing love is rare enough in the genre that this beginning really calls for further development.
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--Pervy



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