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Together
by Zoneefem

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Comment by April on 09/04/15
I enjoyed this story and like many others would have hoped that was me along time ago.  I wonder if they had both gone to bed with a Baby doll nightgown on, what would have been the results??  Imagination is such a fun toy.  April  

Comment by Jimmy on 02/06/10
Oh such a beautiful story except it did make me a little sad that it wasn't me. You are a very good author. The way you described things you must be very beautiful. Oh how true the problems putting on pretty panties can cause some of us. Again thank you for the beautiful story.Much success to you. love Jimmy

Comment by Barbara on 12/08/09
By all means, please continue this story!

Comment by Lisa Kaufmann on 12/07/09
Wonderful story about how a Mom helps her "daughter" realize who she is and how they became close. You indicate that if there are good ideas perhaps the story will continue. Not that I have anything more than what others have said, it still would be great to read how "Sammie" continues through the summer when sis comes home, how they all became closer and how their lives continued to grow as each one became more and more acceptable of "Sammie" and let her continue to grow and blossom.

Comment by Shirley on 10/15/09
What a wonderful Story.  Need to see more though.
I wish I could have ben Sammie when I was younger.  Now I am just a fat over the hill-old broad.
Please write more soon.

Comment by Lorrielle on 09/26/08
A lovely, warm, very loving story.  Continuing would be wonderful, but the comments so far are not recent, so it appears it will not happen.  Sammie and his mom should continue, and they should experience more and more intimacy through Sammie's feminization.  Sammie's sister should love the new Sammie and paricipate.  Sammie should meet a loving girl who loves the new Sammie, and this story could go on and on.  It would be darling.  So then, why not?

Comment by Bombi on 02/24/07
A good storey with a lot of possibilities. If it were up to me the character would continue his transformation slowly untill his sister returned when then she would become involved.Perhaps sister could provide some insight from the teenage perspective of what girls want.I think the character should remain a boy but be allowed to explore his femininity with his family and also a friend of the sisters or a girl friend of his.Of course he should give up his male underwear and wear bras and panties and pierce his ears and do everything right up to the edge of crossing over.

Comment by Dar on 09/17/06
Lovely beginning, the "slow" details make it enjoyable.  Let Susie be suprised, taken aback, cautious and supportive.  Sammie should be able to explore his femininity, but if there's incest let it be siblings.

Comment by Jade on 05/31/06
I not sure about the story I like th whole concept though in most cases the length of the story is good it just seemed to go by to slowly which makes the story seem to long.  I know I wouldn't mind seeing more but It's just hard to handle where it needs to go!

Comment by juliej on 05/09/06
an interesting senario a mothers love for the son turned right when he wanted to feel his femmine side could be more for example mother&sister taking him through his girls on a more permant basis and to see how he feels after that very intersting worth writing more

Comment by lamb on 08/05/05
A lovely touching story.  I wish (and hope!) it were mine.  I have felt the same emotions and have had the same dreams.  All my life, I have felt like Sammie and wished that his/her dreams and mine could be fulfilled.

A loving, understanding family and the joy that sisterhood and womanhood bring are what is important.

Comment by Happy Reader on 07/07/05
You have written a delightful story about a loving son and his loving mother.  By keeping the proper boundries between them, you have established a wonderful foundation to bring the older sister into the story under the same conditions.  Please have one of the sister's friends be understanding, accepting and very interested in Sammie.  Thank you for writing such a touching story!



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