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To Honor and Obey
by Melody Sims

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Comment by Atsuko on 07/09/12
Well ConnerJack, seeing as how I'm not a gamer dnsegeir or even in the gaming business, I don't have a franchise to speak of. If I were in that business though, I would make sure that the games I created actually worked correctly before I released them to the public. That's only common sense. If EA did something right, I'd pat them on the back. Having HUGE sales numbers doesn't mean that everything with their games are wonderful. I buy Sims games because it's the one game I used to love to play but I'm not as excited with the way they are going with this series. I keep buying them hoping that it will get better but it seems like they don't make their games for me anymore.

Comment by Vickie on 12/25/05
I've just read all of your stories on Crystal's site (reread the first two), one after another, with great pleasure.  Each raises delicious issues of subordination and desire, and altogether they offer a considerable range in both the personality of the narrator and the insouciance or sweetness of the domme. Please keep the two that are clearly incomplete going!  They're exactly the kind I love to read (and write too).

Comment by Payal on 12/21/04
Beautiful, sensitive and erotic story at the sametime.This is been my dream too to tell my wife.Much more realistic then fiction.Good job.

Comment by left25 on 12/08/04
great story. If you have more you should post them.



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