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To Love and to Cherish
by Daedalus

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Comment by Silvia. on 08/31/11
I know that you wrote this story a long time ago. But even today this is one of the best stories I have ever read.
Why don't you write more?
Please, come back!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by JoAnnCd on 12/06/01
I have to rank this as one of the best TG stories I have ever read.  It meets the first criterion of a good TG story - It is a good story, period.  The love between the protagonists is so evident, and the plot twist is unique.  

JoAnnCd

Comment by Francesca Barrie on 02/16/01
For me it was original,a bit complicated but I managed to follow it so it is wll written. I do love happy endings especially with marriages and loving relationships.

Comment by Terry on 02/13/01
I thought I had read this story before and after emmie dee's review, I am now convinced that I have.  I agree, it was worth a reread.  You took a complex story that could very easily have been written in a clumsy fashion and wrote a smooth, flowing story that was highly entertaining.  A very good job, indeed.

Comment by emmie dee on 02/13/01
A complex story, deftly told, about an unusual but most loving relationship. I'd read it in another archive, but it was worth the rereading.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/13/01
like how MEG AND MARK were still one in the same still at the end and the happy ever after ending was truely special.  Real signs of character true love there.



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